So glad that you updated! I've been waiting forever to see how this story would go and I'm so happy that you updated! I cannot wait to see how you're going to take this story! It has such a great plot line! :)
It's wonderful, so far. I agree that you don't need a beta, because you are a great writer. I see no mistakes, and if there are, only a few. Although, I didn't see them. Another story to put on my favorites, eh? >.<
Really interesting. I wonder how it will all play out. I've never read Innocent Eyes.
I can't wait for the next update!
Please don't forget about Debt to Be Paid. I love that story! Although, this one is good too.
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such hard choices!!
YAY! I'm so glad you're putting the story up here! I can't wait to read more. I've been checking at the adultfanfiction website, but I'm glad you're posting here! I can't wait to see where you take this story and the others! Please update soon! Great job so far!
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