I have followed this story for years, I am so glad you are still updating as the plot has always been so great; I love both the obvious and the underlying tension you have created between all of the characters. Amazing work!
I sometimes hate when Sesshomaru is potrayed like this but it's fitting in a sense, I still can't get over how he marked Kagms something so below her. And yet there is Ai and his plan, and what he truly desires. I hope you update soon.
Akita (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
....oh my god you're going to kill me with slow updates....I'm on the edge of my seat and really wishing kagome would purify both of them. UPDATE!
Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
Happy to see the update! I've always puzzled over two things. That Sesshomaru can detect certain emotions through aura or smell but not a lie or unease when someone is being manipulative like Kagura? Also it seems odd that Sesshomaru at some point wouldn't confront the cheating directly and immediately. It seems like this Sesshomaru would do it as soon as possible to flaunt that someone could not get away with that and he would then torment them with it. I know he has never had a relationship like this before, but that doesn't feel like that would stop him just make him more vicious in the confrontation. I know Miroku and Sango had goood intentions, but.... I don't know.
I hope there's another update soon!
Eva (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
I'm glad to see this being polished up. Chapter three has a reference to Sesshoumaru and Kagome growing up in modern day era while everything else indicates he is centuries old. Using find will lead you to it easily. Keep up the fabulous story telling.
Ankita (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
Goshhhhh i hate Sesshoumaru i hate Ai i hate kagura at this point i wish i hope ahe just ends up with Kouga or some unknown human.... These two definitely don't deserve her and never will even if it was just a plot Sesshoumaru should have trusted her and Ai you like her you are guilty but still you are gonna use her and then make everything all right wowwww such a gentle man you are -_- maybe kagome should purify both of them and make human would be better ending ..... ^_^ thankew for updating please update sooooooonnnnn i just want to seee kago happy as sooon as possible <3
Anonymous (Chapter 12) - Fri 18 Dec 2015
I miss this story it was very sad I wanted to know how it would end up
I hope it revealed soon enough that kagome didnt cheat on him
Miss C (Chapter 12) - Wed 21 Oct 2015
What if she is pregnant? Sesshomaru is so stupid.
Niomi (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
Thanks for updating. Absolutely love this story. I don't care how long or short it is, im just glad you are still going at it!! ;)
Ai (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
LOVE!Please more!
Valasaurus (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
Now I'm burning to know what those pictures were and how she even got in them! ! On top of that i need to know what happens during the coronation
I feel so badly for Kagome. For Ai to have hurt her and betray her like that and to be using her.....there's only so much a person can take before they are broken beyond repair. I wonder how Sesshomaru will feel when he realizes he was so easily played by his own cousin and a whore. On one hand I want Sesshomaru to suffer ten times more then Kagome but on the other....how much can Kagome take before she ends her life or just breaks inside?
Koree (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
D; This chap was amazinggggggg , i definitely thought Kouga over heard what she said at the end but i guess he didn't lol
If my of, Sparrow was in this story, she'd beat the fuck out of Sesshoumaru, kagura, and Ai. Next please.
Eva (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 Oct 2015
I'm really confused about this fic. I startd from the beginning feeling game for almost anything but I'm really having trouble swallowing this. Sesshoumaru is right in character, but Kagome is totally OC. She is dispicibaly weak. I read reviews and even as far as chapter 6 she still seems to need to grow a spine. I don't get it. I get that you should hate Sesshoumaru for his treatment of her, but I find myself despising Kagome more. She is nothing like the plucky, heroine that strives to find good in everyone and is almost stupidly reckless in her bravery. I still haven't gotten to the point where I figure out what has happened to her to make her everyone's doormat, but I'm not sure after three chapters I have the patience for it. If it turns out she has been crushed by something utterly tragic I guess I could see the drastic change in her personality. I don't know why being dumped by the love of her life would change her character so much considering how many times she's been jilted by Inuyasha in the Manga and anime. I actually love the characterization of Sesshoumaru. It is right on target. You done a fantastic job with it. It's why I've stuck with it so far. Sesshoumaru is the type of being that would accept no one less than an equal. Kagome is definitely not worthy at this point.
Phyllis (Chapter 12) - Sun 18 Oct 2015
Very good! Sesshomaru is finally feeling how tied he is to Kagome. Can't wait for the next update!!
It willl be funny if both Sesshomaru and Kagome find out what both Ai and Kagura at his coronation, and Kagome don't forgive with Sesshomaru and Ai
Ankita (Chapter 12) - Sun 18 Oct 2015
Even after 30min of reading it my anger still lingers so here i am reviewing again T_T can i make a request can you just kill sesshomaru in the next chapter and hand Ai -_- both of you don't deserve to live just get lostttttttttt
Ankita (Chapter 12) - Sun 18 Oct 2015
I hateee hattteee hattee sesshomaru sooo sooo sooo much in this fic i can't evennnn explain and Ai tooo woow some friend he is :/ i wish even when everything is sorted all the truth comes out even when sesshomaru and Ai are on their knees begging for forgiveness Kagome doesn't and throw them out of their life at this point i m even shipping kagome with koga better than these dogsss * disgusted * T_T please please update soooonnnnn
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