I really love that Kagome is strong in this fic. Should give Sesshoumaru a run for his money..although I highly doubt this will be a very romantic fic.

Holy crap...this is absolutely fantastic! I am honestly amazed at your writing and am LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH. Very realistic portrayals so far. Yay for the two betrothed being SessKag! I don't know why I'm surprised. lol

Wow. Can I just say that I just started reading fics on this site and this has been one of the few which are well written and able to capture my interests so raptly. Very excited for this story and especially for the SK relationship...are they the proposed marriage?

OMG just when it was getting good and i was on the edge of my seat PLEASE for the love of everything good update this soon this is too good to prolong

holy crap that was intense!!  cant wait for the next one

Ahhh! So exciting! Delayed review but just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this chapter (and the entire story, really) and was so happy to see an update!

Poor Kagome- my heart really goes out to her and Sesshoumaru.

And I absolutely adore Gina- you write OCs so well that I find myself wanting to know how their stories end up just as much as Kagome and Sesshoumaru.

Wonderful story! Can't wait for when you can post more!

Well...at least she made it alive (?) tragedy was avoided but for how much longer. She has been through so much, not just lately but in her life. I feel like she deserves to catch a break. Hopefully things will start to look up from here. You did a wonderful job continuing the story and how all these characters would react and deal with it. I am on the floor since the edge of my seat just wasn't enough for what is going to happen next. There is never a dull moment and stuff is bout to get blown up even more. Hopefully love does conquer all and the love for Sesshoumaru and Kagome, the love of peace, and the love of both peoples (and the little person in Kagome) all prevail :)

Oh My God this is painful!!!! THERE ARE NO MORE CHAPTERS!!! Write dammit!! Write like your life depended on it!!! I thought my heart damn near stopped when I didn't see the button to click for the next chapter. If you coulda heard my screams. Write more please! And soon!

This might sound terrible but I hope Kagome loses the baby. To teach Sesshoumaru a lesson for not believing in her and actually trying to kill her. Or maybe Kagome should be in a coma long enough for the General to wake and tell them everything that really happened. Or maybe Kagome should 'die' and be revived by tensaiga. That would teach Sesshoumaru to value her more.

Sesshoumaru should suffer her wrath when she wakes.

OH MY GOD!!!!!

I absolutely adore this! your writing really makes me get involvedd in the story, and i spent the entire chapter yelling! I can't wait to see how all these problems get resolved, so please write soon!

Well hell has no fury like a woman scored...when they do find her not guilty, If I were Kagome I would not take him back with open arms...he needs to stew on this for a long time. What a jerk

This might sound horrible but somehow I wish that she would lose that child. I can´t believe Sesshoumaru was actually gonna kill her, how could he let himself be blinded by his anger? Did he forget that he wanted to give her a chance to explain herself? And Seiobo is really a cold bitch. Now after everything she did and said she calls Kagome her daughter? The only ones who deserve to be called her friends and family are Taka, Gina and Inutaisho. If I were Kagome I would want to leave them all. All the hurt, anger and betrayed feelings won´t just go away and even if all of them are victims in this insane game it was Kagome who were hurt the most and she really didn´t deserve that.

Sorry, I´m just so angry. That shows how good your story is.

Oh wow. My stomach is absolutely in knots right now. I was so scared for Kagome when Sesshomaru attacked her. He just seemed so...out of himself and so angry. It was incredible, and better yet, your writing is incredible. I can't wait to see what happens next and definitely hope that the new chapter will arrive soon!

I'm on edge with excitement! Your story's so good! Thank you for sharing :) 

Nooo....i wanted to read more!!!!! Thank you sooooo much for updating.  Love this new chapter.  Full of action and angst.  Poor Kagome...it's gonna take her a while to recover from this emotionally.  Please please please update soon.

Ok, not gonna lie...that was a bit of a tear-jerker.
Another great chapter! I'm sure the next one will be too...soon?

I absolutely love this story and cannot wait for you to update! This chapter makes me hope that Sesshomaru suffers a bit for his actions, which I imagine he'll be punishing himself in the long run. Poor Kagome seems to be sacrificing so much towards peace that I almost hope that she doesn't welcome Sesshomaru back so easily. You have a wonderful way of portraying the characters' emotions and thoughts; it's easy to see that they both have suffered through this whole ordeal. For Sesshomaru to not even give Kagome a chance to prove her innocence must feel like such a major betrayal that I can only imagine what Kagome will be thinking once she's conscious. Gina kept her faith in Kagome alive...why couldn't he? It almost seems like he had doubts from the start.

Well, enough of my rambling! You have an amazing gift of storytelling and I truly enjoy this story. Happy writing!

I love this story so far. I hope you can update it again soon because it is really good so far. And I appreciate that you have few, if any, grammatical errors. 

I'm sure I'm a horrible person for somewhat hoping that she does miscarry, just to teach Sesshoumaru a lesson he'll never forget.

my heart is about to burst