I honestly hope you continue to update. Your portrayal of Sesshomaru and Kagome along with your vivid descriptions are truly rivetting. I love fanfiction (Inuyasha/ DBZ/ Teen Titans/ The Joker are my main favorites). I haven not come across a completed dynamic with such a dynamic on why our favorite Demon Lord is the way he his and I love it. So please, when you find time or the muse begins to sing again (trust in me, I know all about writers block) update and continue to write. Side note: I am excited for the return of FLCL!
OMG.. Please please please, for the love of your fans, please continue this story! You cannot leave this hanging just as Sesshoumaru and Lucifer are about to battle! I need to know what went down, and how does Kagome fit in thus entire story. Why is this on Dokuga in the first place, if your story hasn't really started a Kagome/Sesshoumaru thing here? You mentioned there were 3 parts, and now it's barely even past the middle of part 2... I'm dying to know! Ugh... Sorry for ranting. I just hope you continue your good job when you finally find the time. It's a really good story! I love how you created a Sesshoumaru with multiple beings and a loooong history for him that seems so out of this world. I still can't imagine how much he went through to end up being that demon we're so familiar with. I like blue-eyed Sesshoumaru. ;) Please don't give up on this. Hope to hear an update sooooooon!
Jen (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 Jul 2016
You have to know that you are an amazing writer, like I wish this was an actual book I could go out and buy, something I could physically have! Heck I'm praying you one day finish this story (soon lol) and it maybe gets adapted into a kickass film just so I can see the images you create in mind, come to life on a screen.
With that being said, please try and update !
NOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE DONT STOP THERE!!!!! THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING, IT CANT NOT BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!
karen (Chapter 7) - Mon 17 Aug 2015
I never usually read incomplete stories but you are such a awesome writer. I'm afraid now that I read Exodus and it's going to drive me insane until your next update :(
lisa (Chapter 7) - Mon 08 Dec 2014
Hi...I never know how to start one of these things lol. Ive read the entirety of part one of testament in one day. It was magnificent! I didnt review and im sorry for that...i shouldve reviewed every chapter. I first found ur writings when i was searching for a little smut lol and found Daliance which i think is absolutely brilliant.
This new universe that youve created in the Testament series is breathtakingly vivid and is coming together so well that I fell in love with it in minutes. Please continue your writings as you have extremely happy and anxious fans waiting! Oh btw can i get an update whenever you write a new chappie? I know im one of millions and ill probably figure out how to get an email update of when new chapters come out...eventually. But if you have time id really appreciate it lol.
Deaville, both of Testament 1 & Testament 2 are just phenomenal. The story and characters are larger than life and really swept me up into this universe. I love the depth of these characters and the expansiveness of this storyline. Edge of my seat throughout. Great pacing, too.
it is sad that you haven't update in so long, you are such a wonderful writer and i usually don't feet to drawn into Fanfictions enough to want to read them at work. I know that life does get in the way of our pleasures, but I sincerely hope that you continue this story one day. It doesn't have to be soon but I feel that leaving a story this good unfinished is quite sad!!
first i want to say i love your stories they are well writen and captivateing, 2nd i want to say i know how life goes and i really do hope you get to finsh this
I sincerely hope you finish this. It is very rare to find a story on here that is not only well written but has such an interesting and unique premise. I have never reviewed a story on here and made an account for the sole purpose to do so. Please finish the story and if you haven't thought about a career in writing then you should. This ranks up with some of my favorite sci/fi fantasy books. Hopefully this encourages to write more :) Thank you for sharing this with us.
AMAZING. SUPER KUDOS :)
Well, my hopes for Kagome being tainted by the amber-eyed Sesshomaru are not looking too prospective, but I am enjoying this story. The visions occassionally make me want to hurry through them but my interest is not diminished! Looking forward to more updates! Favorite part so far was probably Sesshomaru's laughable failed attempts at what had appeared to be simply catching a leaf on fire, truly had me snickering.
Roxette (Chapter 7) - Sat 17 Nov 2012
I'm so glad that you posted another chapter . It's amazing ... beautiful
Keep it coming.
Haven (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Nov 2012
I just discovered this fic and I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your work. It's so well written, with a nice natural flow and although the first few chapters confused me, I knew that it somehow works with the mystery of the story. The last chapter's levity was a nice break from the intense feel of the earlier chapters. Honestly, I don't know how I feel about this Sess, but his background story is so different from any that I've read so far that I'm intrigued and can't wait to read more.
Phew! Well, I have to say... amazing story! It is so well-put together. I just spent the better part of two hours reading this second part of your little saga and completely forgot to eat my breakfast. Usually stories that delve into Sesshomaru's past in such detail turn me off and I get bored easily, but this story has become the acception. This "blue-eyed" persona of Sesshomaru's is certainly throwing me off as much as it is poor Kagome. That too is usually something that bothers me - when a writer alters the main character's personality so much, they don't seem like the original character any more. But, you balanced it out nicely by throwing a curve ball and giving Sesshomaru multiple personalities. And now, le sigh, I will have to wait patiently for you to bless us with the next chapter.
Thanks for writing so thoughtfully and taking the time to pay attention to the details. This really is a great story. I did in fact read your comment about a reviewer calling this story a waste of their time - I know some readers prefer stories that get straight to the point, but when you find a story like this that is written so well, I think its worth it to take the time to read it it and enjoy the effort put in it.
Ladyfifi
Keep it coming.
I am so glad I stuck with it and read this--this is a very riveting and imaginative story! Granted, I will admit to having skimmed through the Luke/Johnathan dialogue, not from taking affront as you warned in your author notes at the beginning of that chapter, but more out of a sense that it didn't further establish those characters in my mind, and didn't really add to the story, imo.
I absolutely love how you put the characters through hell. I really do find that way of storytelling is very lacking in fanfiction, unless it's for emo wangsty-wangst boohoo effect, which I abhor. But Sesshoumaru getting beaten to a pulp, friggin' dying and then coming back like some youkai jeebus? Awesome. Kagome running till she pukes and passes out? Lol. Things aren't all cherry blossoms and sparkles in your story, and that is fan-friggin-tastic. I've seriously been reading S/K since '03, and is it ever a thrill when I find something that feels like a complete reinvention, rather than yet another permutation of the same six tired old plots.
By the way, good job sticking with this even though life gets in the way. You're an inspiration; maybe someday I'll think of your example and post the parody I wrote back in '04 lol. Seriously though, keep it up, because it looks like it's getting even better. (those shadow creatures are a work of genius.)
Keep it coming.
This sequel is great, keep it coming.
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