Kagura deserves a beatdown sequel. Good oneshot but make sure you flow a little better and do a spell check.

The story was alright, if a bit rushed. You switch from Sesshomaru to Shessomaru several time. You might want to go back to correct it. Overall, it wasn't a bad one-shot. I was kinda confused in the beginning wondering if they were in the future or the feudal era.

Adorable!

I'm sorry, but I'm a little confused: is the story set as alternate universe or a canon divergence? It's mentioned that Naraku was defeated and Kagome traveled through the well. How is it then that she's with Sesshomaru in modern Tokyo and Kagura's alive and well (for now anyway)? You may want to consider a backstory on how they came to be together, Kagura's survival, and Rin's transformation. Otherwise, it is a sweet story!

Very Cute... but... HOW COULD YOU SPELL SESSHOUMARU WROUNG!? loved you story, truely i did, but that just bothered me the whole tme i was trying to enjoy it. its SESSHoumaru (or sesshomaru w.e.) NOT SHESSoumaru.

So sweet!  I hope she goes back and purifies Kagura.