RubyJeweler (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Dec 2011

How romantic. Her oba-san playing matchmaker.

amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 May 2011

wonderfully written,steamy and sexy!

redpixie (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 May 2011

That was a really enjoyable read ! There was no word or sentence that felt out of place, everything flowed really nicely. 

Her aunt really is devious though xD

amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Feb 2011


Anne (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Feb 2011

Awww, I loved it~! I especially like descriptive detail...I felt like a voyeur peering in. o.o Thanks for the great read <3

Sion Alphaios (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

This is a nice fic but you used "in lieu of" incorrectly. The phrase means "instead of" or "in place of." You used it here: "Kagome carefully laid out the tea things on the table in lieu of his arrival" as, I'm guessing from context clues, "in preparation for" or something along those lines. Also, though some of your, er, Japanese vocabulary was definable by context clues, some of them were not so I'd advise, maybe, including the definitions somehow, such as a glossary or simply putting it in the text. Otherwise, good job.

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