A truly fantastic piece of work from you, Chaotic.  I like how you portrayed Kagome with such a strong personality to offset Sesshoumaru's. 

The modern girl was really mortified by the barbaric actions of the Inu Lord in order to choose his breeder and let him have it.  Once again, her mouth got her into trouble....albeit, good trouble :)  Her character was a true foil to his blandness, which brought out so much more of his personality, just in dealing with the girl.  But, DANG!  The girl wouldn't shut up and enjoy herself! LOL.  At least he convinced her to go with it.

I was actually surprised that he ended up taking her as mate, for as much as they bumped heads.  But I am glad.  Nice work.

wonderful :)

thats freakign awesome!

hhnnnggg that was hot. I need to go to bed now >.> past my bed time

I loved it!

CR, this was a brilliant piece of work! Excellent job! And it doesn't hurt that the lemon was FIREMENZ!!!! HAWT!!!!!

I absolutely LOVED this! It was so different from anyother fic I've read with these two and I thouroughly enjoyed the language and name calling. It was more...I dont know, real? I guess you could say, I mean I cant picture Kagome calming right down even after becomming an expecting mother. She's got a mouth on her, something that I see vanish in a lot of stories after she mates with Sesshoumaru she seems to lose that fire. unless there's a good reason for her too lose it like a tragedy or age. In this one, she doesnt and I think you described her as still being in her teens, yes? So I dont think she'd lose that mouth from age!

Anyways, I absolutely loved this :3  as stated before. Hahaha! He agreed with her to being a Son of a bitch, how funny, ooh how the truth in fics works eh? And like Miroku and Sango have room to talk!