I would really like to see the progression of this story it's got a great beginning I'd love to see the end
Pleassssssssssssssssssssssse finish the story!!! Imay not be a member of dokuga but I love the story you have started to write and think that it is beyond great.!!!!! So please do finish it when you can!!!!! With much thanks!!!!!
chey (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| i love this story. do u plan to continue? i do hope so. i look forward to reading more.
Diespedes (Chapter 5) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| This is sooooo good! I cant wait for the next update!
Emerald Gray (Chapter 5) - Thu 24 Jul 2008
| I love the writing style and the plot. I expect an update soon! :3
| I somehow hope that Shin and Sesshomaru like... combine entities... and then Kagome can have them both! =D
Ashes (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
| Hahahahaha!*Huggles Shippo* Very cool. It took a bit to get into your writing style at first. You started out mostly in present tense and as you wrote you started to use past tense more. I'm interested to see where you take this story.
| cool story so far. can't wait to see what happens next. is the sesshomaru in the future really a reincarnation or not? Keep up the good work & please update soon:)
Tana-san (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
| Hey Girl...it's been far too long. Email me and let me hear how you've been and I'll update you on me. Much love As Always, Jen
TeaLeavesGreen (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
| Misused, situationally incorrect fangirl Japanese, author's notes in the middle of the story, and excessive use of the ellipsis - and somehow you're getting rockstar ratings?
The premise sounded interesting, but I cant slog through all of that bullshit. If you want to write in Japanese, I expect to see kana and kanji, at the very least. Stick to the language you (sort of) know, mkay?
I'm sure this is painful and harsh to read, but I hate it when a fic sounds interesting and then turns out to be crap because the author's trying to be cool and mangling two languages instead of one. I think you would really improve as an author if you worked on your composition skills in English. Your Japanese fails.
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