Well you may not be happy with your chappy... but I like it fine!
And you're reasoning for her immortality is justifiable as much as any other adaptation!
I was not disappointed with the chapter or with your reasoning of Kagome's immortality. I think that you did great, and I can't wait for your next update!! So PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
Alice (Chapter 5) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
I can't wait for them to meet. :3
i love this! more please!
Most of the time when a story takes place in Kagome's time I will stop reading it, (I do not know why I do not like them) but I really like yours! I hope you update soon so that we can find out what happened to everyone and why Kagome lived. I also can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction from what Kagome has done to the land and than how their relationship progresses. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
As interesting as the first chapter! I really hope to see how this progresses and the turns that Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship will take.
Excellent chapter, Soul, I can feel his longing for home... even if it is desolate. See, you just need to keep a firm hold on your muse, let her/him know who is Alpha, and he/she will behave as a good packmate.
*Grabs Soul's Muse and smacks her upside the head* I apologize for the violence, but your Muse must be brought to order! This is a strange and eerie tale and I want to read MORE of it. Your Muse needs to be disciplined. I will send you a virtual electric cattle prod...
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 3) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
*snickers*okay...keep in mind this statement is from a sleep-deprived individual..."at least Sesshomaru will know she's fertile"
I do love this series and can hardly wait to see Fluffy's reactions...and just how long it'll take for he and/or his beast to wish to...breed and repopulate his domain.
hmm...he's kinda the protector and she's the nurturer...kinda like mother nature or something.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
btw, we are gonna learn just what happened to the earth right? how did Kagome survive? was she in the feudal era and somehow came back after the apocalypse?
Take your time :)
I'll be waiting to read whenever you post!
Alice (Chapter 3) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
I love it so far!
I don't know why you haven't recieved any reviews on this yet. It seems very well written and has an interesting plot! Don't give up :) I look forward to seeing how this story goes.
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