I hope that this wasn't just a one-shot, cause you set your self upfor a great story.
How will Kagome cope with the changes? How will Sesshy handle her and Shippo?
Will her friends and Kougas family turn against or support her will they understan?
Will she find out in time to abort the baby,and if so will she? Will she fell betrayed and hurt?
What about her job? Will she keep the baby and run from Sesshy?
So many question need to be answered. Hopefully you'll add more to the story. Can't wait!
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TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
That was pretty good. And I loved the how the song didn't take up the entire story with just a few scenes in between. Great Job!
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