That was ... wow. Can't think any other words to describe the one-shot. That was also a first and different, which I like. Yea I can't imagine anyone do that on a bike. lol Ha I bet I'll be funny if there was a cop doing paroling around there and caught them in the act, and both of their eyes have that caught-in-the-deer-lights look. Kagome's thoughts: "SHIT!! NOOO DON'T WANT TO GO TO JAIL!! I'M THE GOOD GIRL!!" Sesshomaru's thoughts: "GODDAMIT!! I WAS ALMOST DONE!! *GROWLS* I COULD TEAR HIM A PART ... DAMN KAGOME WON'T APPROVE OF IT!! OR WILL SHE?? *looks at her face and then smirk evilly >:3*" lol Good job!!
Cherry (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
Really liked that! A great read.
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