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Elvis (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 May 2020

This is golden.  I'm so glad I got to read this!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sat 13 Jun 2015

I have really enjoyed this so far. Hope you update soon. Cheers!


Susy V (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 May 2015

Haha! Poor jaken! He tries to help out his lord but geats hurt instead. Can't wait to read more of this. I think it's ingenious to write this in Jake s POV. 


mythicamagic (Chapter 5) - Tue 05 May 2015

Hii, great chapter as usual and I'm glad I could help with ideas! Ohhh I'm glad your including the demoness's and I can't wait to see where it goes. I really like your writing style and the fact that it's all from Jakens pov. Hope to read more soon! ^^


DeathDagger (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 May 2015

This story has loads of potential!!! I'm really interested to see what you do with it


Saiya (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 May 2015

Oh Poor Jaken His Heart was in the Right Place.


Lumi (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 May 2015

Oh, I am loving where this is going and also loving that you decided to continue with the plot.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 May 2015

Poor Jaken, lol he just didn't make a good choice there did he? (: cnat wait for more, fun story!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 4) - Sun 12 Apr 2015

I'm so glad to see you've written again!

Thanks for writing.


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Apr 2015

I like your story so far. I think that  writing this story from Jaken's point of view  is a good choice. You have captured the mindset of a feudal vassal prefectly.  I also like that you made Kagome a diamond in the rough in a practical way. I look forward to seeing her polished through the story. I look forward with great egaerness to more of your story.


rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Apr 2015

next chapter please


Kessa (Chapter 4) - Wed 08 Apr 2015

Excellent chapter! I'm glad you were able to take the suggestions and make something out of them. I can't wait to see more :)


mythicamagic (Chapter 4) - Tue 07 Apr 2015

I really like this story, its unique! You should defo continue it! I think that if you showed a chapter of Kagome learning techniques for spells or maybe sword play it would be good. You could have her failing a few times at it so Jaken steps in to help her as target practice, it would be funny XD

Then you could maybe have those other demonesses turn up in another chapter claming that Sesshoumaru's servent was looking for suitable mates for his lord, which would land Jaken in hot water with Sesshoumaru and also maybe give Kagome a chance to show her new skills and that shes a better prospect as a mate. I like the idea of a bonus chapter with his failed attempts at getting them together, and then after that just have them getting togther because of something minor that he did, it would be funny since he put so much effort into making sinarios for them to get togther that something he did by accident actually did the job better than him. Also Koga could show up to make Sesshoumaru jelous if you wanted :D

Just some thoughts, but I really like it so far! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Mona (Chapter 4) - Mon 06 Apr 2015

I enjoyed reading the fanfic and hope you continue.


emma (Chapter 4) - Mon 06 Apr 2015

I think this is the first story i've ever read from Jaken's POV. He doesn't get enough love, all that loyalty and devotion for nothing! Loved this and hope to see more soon.


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Jun 2013

How about Jaken "suggesting" that Sesshomaru train Kagome so that Kagome can become strong and so that they spend more time together?

LOVE IT BY THE WAY!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!!!


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 May 2012

I do believe squacking is in order! -jokes and ponders- I have no idea.

'Sometimes the strength inside is better than out.' Or you can come up with spells, training, ect... Hope that helps to give you something. Oh paragraph 4, sentence 5, (He thought was Rin was the worse he had come across, and then he had met the elder ones.) I think you might want to take out the first (was)


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 2) - Wed 23 May 2012

Lol that was amusing. -eyes light up- If you can come up with how Jaken thinks I believe you can come up with almsot anything! Half the time you never really know and thats what adds to the fun. Awh -sighs- kids.

Thank you for writing.


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 1) - Wed 23 May 2012

Oh my gosh! When I read the title of your story "Little Green Matchmaker" I was like 'did that just say...' and I re-read it and the summary. I was appauled. And so wanting to read it because of my insatiable curiousity I am.

Near the middle of the chapter I could have sworn that narrowing of the eyes from Sesshoumaru was him being suspicious of Jaken and what he might be up to next. -snickers- If I had been thier I would have sat back on my haunches and made an undignified umph. Thinking he was dead meat. Then "The half breed" caught me.

-grins and leans back- I think you protrayed the green toad well. Sometimes a short chapter is a needed one. Oh a really good motivator is walking around a place you don't know or a park. Another one is talking to a complete stranger. Random I know -shrugs- but it works ^-^


Lyss (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

I don't believe you're making Jaken OOC... I think it's something he'd probably do to be helpful lol xD i'm intrigued on where you are going to go with this and I'm enjoying it so far! :) Thanks for writing! :)


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