Interesting start. You've definitelly captured my attention. I look forward to seeing where you go witht this story. :)
Oh my... what a gut wrenching scene.Beautifully written. Great work! The first chapter alone brings up so many questions, gives such key important information which the story is going to be based on... I love it. I can't wait to find out how this changes Kagom's view, how the conversation turns out, what has happened to get sesshoumaru the way he is, whether sesshoumaru is stuck in this lifestyle or refuses to change his lifestyle, or maybe he refused to change before and now it is too late. His appearance alone shows that he has encountered many difficulties and.... oh boy. Or even what happened to his retainers. Did jaken survive? Is he the last youkai left? If Kagome ends up changing history, what will happen?.......Anyways, I just mean that I am very eager to read your next chapter. (XD I have found a new diamond in the rough, a story to continue reading)
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