Reviews for Makeshift Life by Avadrea

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Seluna Maru (Chapter 2) - Fri 14 Oct 2022

The end left a but incomplete. I see what the reviews meant.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Fri 14 Oct 2022

Him desperately wanting her is a huge turn on for me! And I completely understand why Kagome wasn't in love with him yet! She didn't want to be hurt again especially since Sesshomaru himself had yet to open up to her! He was cold and hiding his feelings thia whole time! Urghhh such great writing!


Pebbles (Chapter 2) - Sun 22 Mar 2020

I will echo many others that reqested more. Yet I think how you left this contrast of the two chapters works just as well. Stark contrast between both leave a feel of promise that is not so predictable as so many fics. 

 


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Jun 2019

I like it


Raynell (Chapter 2) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Goddamn stupid Kagome. Why be so hung up with that idiot Inuyasha when she has Sesshomaru? SESSHOMARU, ffs! Anyhoo, this was very hot, steamy and well-written. You captured the angst perfectly. Well done.


Nicole (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

I got a message about chapter 3, but there was nothing here when I arrived. Did the interwebz accidentally delete it?


marisel (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

nice story but it e feel like missing a detail, you get like she has not acceted him completle..   but them  i am no writer..  nice work.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Sep 2014

This was lovely.


Eva (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Sep 2014

I've read and enjoyed many of your stories, but this is my first review. I enjoy your writing style and find your ideas compelling and enjoyanle. I really like the whole idea behind Makeshift Life. I was suprised to see you had added to it, and pleased. It stands well as it is, but I would still love to see how Kagome moves from resignation to acceptance and maybe one day contentment. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

It would be wonderful if you did a few more chapters. Showing her accepting him slowly and giving up Inuyasha. This was lovely. Thanks.


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

That was just WOW! What else is there to say.


SilverInu93 (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

im going to say this now  DAMN THAT IS HOT !!!!


Nicole (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

It's nice to see Kagome slowly moving from basic acceptance towards contentment and love - and Sesshomaru having the patience to open up to her and help her get there. 

If you do ever add, it would be wonderful to have a chapter showing Kagome's full acceptance and love for Sesshomaru. This second chapter also got me wondering how she ended up with Sesshomaru in the first place. 


Wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Apr 2012

Wow!  This is hot!  I like it!

Thank you :)


henandchicks (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jan 2012

I was afraid this would be too sad.  Boy, was I wrong.  Sensual and sweet.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.  Thank you!


wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Jan 2012

Wow!  Words escape me.  Wow!

Look forward to reading more of your works.  This one fic has made me a devoted follower.  Wow!  I am speechless.  :)


Akitomi Vampiress Queen (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Sep 2011

I like it!!!!! It was awesome!!!!! I wonder... are you going to make a sequel of this?? Or maybe like a prequel to tell your readers what truly happened for Kagome to become Sesshoumaru's mate. Hn, either way it was awesome!!!!


The Lady W (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 Jun 2011

Please do not take the following comment as dissmissive or mean. It is not meant to be:

Despite the sex and graphic detail, this story isn't erotica at all. It is about emotions, intense emotions. And that kind of caught me by surprise.

I liked how you used eye contact and kissing to show the tender side of the physical act of making love. It really fit.

Very well done.


Ejunkie (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011

Really, really excellently done. Their relationship, the emotion and this scene were intense and carried this through so well..! love. ;u;


Kamiki (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 May 2011

This was fantastically written!
WHEW and hot, hot, hot.  Great job :)


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