Good

love this story. kind of wish it would of ended with just sessh and kagome in the end XD

Not a huge fan of Tougea and kind of hoping he is out of the picture completely by the time the story is but part of me feels he wont be. Otherwise I love this story so much and its amazing!!!

Awww Touga you done messed up lol

Points for Sessho!!!!

LoL! Already he's jealous

How he just gonna decide who she's mating??!!! I hope she puts him in his place....great dog general my a$$!

it took me three days to finish this wonderful, beautiful, emotional, and (dare i say it), erotic love story. i can't wait for the sequel. i would never have thought to use Hojo in that manner. im glad you did. you put depth in this story and becuase of that i have come to love it. i put off reading this story, but im glad i got to see the imagination you have when it comes to a sess/kag fanfic. i am sooooo looking forward to the second story. i'll be looking out for it. c'ya'

You still have spelling errors within the 1st parpagraph, starting in the 3rd sentance. In the last sentance in the 4th paragraph has a spelling error too.

You just plain out need to do some spelling and grammer editing in this chapter. in one paragraph your repenting a couple words in the same sentance.

I noticed that you capitalize the word ok when it looks better if you spell the whole word out. When you capitalize the word ok it looks like your screaming the word. I noticed that you done this in a couple of chapters.

I like the the story so far.

Why make Sesshomaru's mother dead? In the manga and anime she is clearly alive.

There are some grammer errors too.

I think you made the story alittle to wordy. In some areas you overstated what the charactors where thinking. [I noticed that you make this mistake in your other stories too.]

I love this fanfic so much! its so well written!! so when are you going to start the sequel because this story was amazing!!!

I was finally able to find this again!  I adore this fic and love the way you kept mostly within in canon, but in a new way; twisited some of the adventures, but still, allowing the team of Sango, Miroku, Shippo , and even Rin to come about.  I thiught the portrayl of Kagome, Sess, & Toga were great.  However, I need to ask, you mentioned in chapter 66, that there would be (may be)? a sequel.  this was left at a good spot, but did not resolve everything.  Will you be writing a sequel? I do hope so.  anyway I love your writing and was glad I found this again.

HOT!

Oh. My. God.

Beautiful work. Beautiful story and that is so like Sesshoumaru.

Sequel, you mentioned? Is it out yet?

I can't wait to read more of your work.

Excellent.

Inupapa has always been my fav pairing, but good ones are hard to find. I love how you have done this one.

Hojo always did creep me out, even in the Manga. The guy either had to be a world class idiot or a stalker to not grasp that Kagome was not interested

Oh how I loved this story. and am so delighted to hear that there is a sequel it is awesome I am going to go look for it now on your home page. I really hope it is there and crosses my fingers hoping it is complete. LOL thank you so much for sharing such a delightful story.

I enjoyed that very much. 

Yikes, stalked in both eras, physically and in her dreams, while being courted by two men. There must be some kind of meltdown coming soon... I don't know of many women who could deal with all that Kagome has on her plate without a breakdown or major withdrawl of some kind.

I'm really enjoying the story! Mostly 'cause I adore InuPapa (in general), so this story is two favourite pairings for the price of one! :)

I love Kagome's mom. She's amazing :)

I hope kags marries both of them

OMG ! LOL! go Inu-papa, this is really good, im enjoying reading it !! :)