Omg gosh aside from how incomplete the plot about Naraku is the overall focus of tje story was so warm, cute, and fluffy! The turn of events at the end got me by surprise but still worth it! The characters personality here and all are spot on as well.
Short but sweet! Truly recommended...^.^
^-^ <3<3<3
Dani (Chapter 12) - Fri 02 Apr 2021
This was an amazing story! Love it!!
I have enjoyed reading this but I wish there was more
that was exceadingy adorable, thank you
Suka25 (Chapter 12) - Fri 06 Mar 2015
I would love another chapter or story to this one. What happens!?!?!?!
Nicole (Chapter 6) - Wed 01 Jan 2014
I'm not a huge Koga fan, but I love how you write him in your stories. This chapter really shows that off. :)
Ah ramen! I hope that Naruku doesn't discover Inuyasha's weakness! Please update this story!
Suka25 (Chapter 12) - Sun 20 May 2012
Oh come on.... Thats mean!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suka25 (Chapter 12) - Wed 07 Mar 2012
NO I want to know if they both mate kagome come on please finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol ok that was really realy cute. scared the crap out of me for a moment but it was cute.
This is a really good story. But, i'm a little confused when Inuyasha asked Sesshoumaru if they can share Kagome did Sesshoumaru agree or not. What about Naraku? Is there going to be a sequel?? If Sesshoumaru says no will Inuyasha find someone new? Please I want to know.... Its bugging me.
Brianna (Chapter 12) - Tue 02 Aug 2011
I really enjoyed reading your story and just about had a panic attack when inuyasha "died". but its sad kikyo died probably to be with inuyasha only to have him actually alive sad but all in all a very good story
ps excuswe the grammar i dont write well when i'm half asleep
I liked this. I'm not a fan of InuYasha's death but I liked the way that you wrote it. Of course it was better when he came back. ;) Great job. I know i will be re reading this.
I love your story. I really liked that Inuyasha didn't really die. I loved that you made that the group struggle to defeat Naraku. I thought that was unique.
Please Please Please dont let that be the end. I hope you plan on a sequel. I loved that story. I loved how you made Inuyasha come back "alive." I was so shocked and happy. I almost started crying.
Wow..
I enjoyed this very much.
Awesome!
lara (Chapter 12) - Fri 21 Jan 2011
that was great. I think I have read part of it before but I'm unsure. I hope it isn't over I really can't wait to see what happens next. I like the fact that Sessh & Inuyasha are willing to get along. I can't wait to see if you put anything in about Inuyasha thanking Kagome about what happened with Kikyo & Kagome when Kagome told Kikyo of Inuyasha's passing & Kagome held Kikyo & let her cry I also wonder if Inuyasha heard what Kikyo said to Kagome as she was leaving after she had cried her eyes out on Kagome. I also wish you were more descriptive when you tell us what goes on between Sessh & Kagome...it seems weird that they only did it that one time when he marked her, I would think that once he marked her as his mate he & she would want to spend some time alone together getting to know each other better in a more intimate way....like a honeymoon, how can either or them be satisfied with doing it only one time. I also think they should be more careful with the well since Naraku obviously knows about it & had planned to do something that would have kept Sessh & Kagome stuck in her time period now he could trap Sessh,Kagome & Inuyasha so I think they should start thinking about leaving people to guard it or put wards up so only certain people can go near it or see it or whatever...just like they are able to put barriers around people ,places & things that only certain people can enter.
I really look forward to reading more of this story so I hope you continue to write more of it.
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