I actually was completely enamored with the story until the last chapter...it just seemed to be lacking something. Add to that the fact that Kagome is ontelligent enough to understans and think logically the whoe story until Inuyasha (the challenger) attacks her mate??? Get outta here! She had the nerve to be mad because she thought his immature, two timing, manipulative ass was dead?! Didn't she listen to Sesshomaru's story about the woman he loved , didn't she realize she was Inu's fall back plan???? She just pissed me off so badly!!!!
Oh well before then your story was so beautiful and yummy!!!
Ezriee (Chapter 11) - Tue 12 Jan 2016
I adore this story! It's just so full of hentai goodness! You did an amazing job with this. Thank you so much for sharing!
Ezzie
Sexy story. Is there a sequel?
Very good and VERY VERY LEOMON-Y. loved it from beginning to end. keep up the good writing and the Great lemons. you have a very hentai mind and i dont fault you for it either. c'ya'
Jessica (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
A great story indeed! you are awesome :)
Nicole (Chapter 11) - Thu 19 Jun 2014
Hmmm, it doesn't quite feel like "just another lemon," and I most definitely enjoyed it quite a lot. It is not often that Sesshomaru and Kagome take turns dominating each other, but I sure enjoy it when they do!
Daniela (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Jun 2014
LOVED IT! SO MUCH!
BLUSH BLUSH AND EXTREME SUPER BLUSH.I don't know if I'll be able to finish this.
Becky (Chapter 11) - Mon 07 Oct 2013
Can we just take a moment to talk about how fuckin' beautiful this was. LOL.
Sarah (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Sep 2013
That was the best erotic fanfic I've ever read! Nice work,
Wow. This was the longest, hottest, raunchiest, sweetest, most beautiful lemonfic I have ever read. The sex scenes were wonderfully written, the plot was not only believable but wonderfully executed, and the characterisations were spot-on! Brilliant. You're humour had me chuckling and the scene where Sesshoumaru says he belongs to Kagome had me dying from the sexual fluff. Thank you so much for writing this story, I enjoyed it immensely and am sure I will enjoy it again!
that was so hot! I love SM, especially the Dominatrix kind, thankyou so much!
kristi (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Sep 2012
i know u said the it was the end of the story but could u make another one plz....i loved thins one so much
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