Can't wait to see the choas you have instore for Sess. Thanks
Ok, now remember I am commenting as I go on this, so things will be very random. Not that you aren't used to that from me daily anyway. XD
Slipping into his chambers, he put his sword up, <----totally went to a GM place there. @_@ FIRST SENTENCE! GAH!
On the heels of that, he stood there blinking, wondering where that had all come from. <---Ahahaha! She got you good you fu@@er!
-.- Sessh is such a scheming butthead sometimes. I think alot of guys do that though. Hubbin does to me sometimes, if I am in a bad mood and he wants some booty. He'll be all sweet and like, do the dishes for me or something. -eyeroll- Silly boys.
I like Kronishi. He's like, I'm gonna watch you flail because it's funnier for me this way, and I will be there to laugh at you when you realize what's going on. :x
Awww, I hope she befriends the new gaurds and they are not just playing nice with herbecause they were told to.
CAn't argue with the fact that he is evil. Ha! She should use that in EVERY argument somehow then. And she will always win. I bet then he'd find something to argue. :x
TAKE THE MONEY AND SPEND IT!! Hahahahahaha! If only hubbin said that once in awhile. XD I wonder if she is gonna buy the 'pet' i have been waiting for though. Hehehe.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I don't remember you saying she was gonna give it to Sesshomaru! LMFAO! I thought it was just gonna be hers. ROFL
XD!!! I can't wait for sh@@ to hit the fan with the otter. Awesome chapter! I loved it, as usual. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
hmmm, can't wait for that X3
HA! Sessh is starting to care. And I have a feeling everyone else will know he does, before he himself knows. XD He's always the last. I'm glad he is trying to make everything in his home good for Kagome. It has to be hard to live in a place like that andnot have anyone but an animal to really talk to. That would make me insane.
I can't wait to see what he is going to put together to cheer her up too. I have a feeling it will either be an epic fail, or she's gonna swoon and everything will be all better. Not gonna put my money on either though, because you usually up and prove me wrong. >.> UPDATE SOON THOUGH BECAUSE YOU KNOW I HATE WAITING IN SUSPENSE!!! And I'm waiting for another too. You know what I'm talkin about. <.<
Whip the muse back in shape, (because we all know how muchit likes that) and get to writing woman! You don't want r0o and I to have to put together a posse, come to your apartment and....well thats as far as I've gotten with the plan. But it will not be pleasant! At not for you, can't say for the muse. But still! I'll spam you with Justin Beiber and other unspeakably horrible things! -shakes fist at- Just update soon! -cries-
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(That took me forever btw. >.> See how much I luff you? :P )
*giggles* those stupid people, seriosuly, a pissy Sesshomaru? really? i wouldnt want to deal with that!
lara (Chapter 16) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
I'm glad you updated I've been looking forward to what was going to happen next & now I'm looking forward to the next update..
hopefully Sessh will figure out the prob before Kagome finds out what his original plan was/is..even if he has to go to Kronishi & explain his unpleasant feeling & when it started .I feel Kronishi will know what's going on but Sessh won't believe he's suffering guilt ...I can picture Kronishi trying to explain to Sessh ..you took an innocent girl from your half brother cause you were angry & wanted the sword he has.The innocent girl happens to be the Shikon Miko but didn't know until recently when the Shikon Jewel was torn from her body.So she's an untrained powerful Miko with an enormous amount of untapped power,a huge aura filled with intense purity,a kind heart & she's educated & she's from 500yrs in the future.
Since you took her & you being an Inu you can tell by scent truth from lies,you learned she was a virgin who'd never kissed a boy, she didn't care that you are Sessh,Lord of the Western Lands(didn't care you were rich or royalty) realizing she couldn't be bought,you used her innocence against her & you've done everything in your power to make her believe you care for her & she thinks she means something to you. You know she cares/likes you & she believes you return her feelings.She gave you her virginity & willingly gives all of herself to you, even takes you 500yrs into the future to meet her mom & you convince her mom you'll do everything to protect her,make sure she's safe & cared for...then you start get an uncomfortable feeling in your stomach & chest...now you Sessh are known as an honorable youkai who has gained respect by not telling lies & sticking to a code of honor.....meanwhile, this innocent who you've tricked into thinking you care for ,you've taken her virginity (something she can't get back & in some societys makes her a ruined woman), you call her kitten,get her to dress up like one & use her body when you wish,get her to do things she'd never do but she does them only for you to make you happy.
The 1st time you see Inu you taunt him about trading the sword for her.Mikos are sensitive,emotional beings & the very nite you taunt Inu you return to her & something seems off. You come to the castle & the 1st day you go to screw some other female knowing she's waiting for you in your bed....have you asked yourself how you'd feel if you found out when you were in your study she snuck off to have sex with another male in the castle & then washed his scent from her body & pretended like she'd been waiting for you.
Have you considered the benefits she offers?her knowledge of the next 500yrs? Have you looked into info or scrolls on powerful Mikos & powerful youkai & what happens if they produce pups...just to see & make sure you know everything.??..info & knowledge is power.
.everyone in the castle knows she's a human miko you are using as a pet whore & although they know this ,you tell them not to tell her what her position & treat her as an equal....they see her as their natural enemy since she's miko & they know you're using her as a whore or sex toy for the time being......only few of us know you plan to trade her to your half bro the hanyou for a sword....when you told me your plan I had only met her briefly & in the few minutes that I met her I could tell that she was beautiful, kind,warm,obviously educated,didn't care if a being is youkai,hanyou or human & judges beings as individuals on their actions & how they treat others. I warned you at that time that it was unlike you to lie to a being in order to use them & then trade them for an object.I also told you I wouldn't tell her what you were doing but I wouldn't lie to her.
Sorry if that bothered you, but I was picturing his friend Kronishi trying to figure out whats wrong..I hope I didn't upset you with my babbling & if I did please let me know & I'll only leave brief reviews from now on as I in no way mean to upset you & love this story very much.
I look forward to the next chapter,actually I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
Awww, the stubborn fool is falling in love with her! I really love the way you're doing this, Dani. However, I need another chapter right now! Don't make me chain you in the walkout dungeon in chat!
missy (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Mar 2011
This is a really great, wonderful, good, asweome story, and i love and liken this story since i first started reading it, your a very great, good, wonderful, awesome author who wrote this very great, wonderful, good awesome story!
amy (Chapter 16) - Sun 20 Mar 2011
Thank you for alleviating her pain! so he could see it, love your writing, keep it up and of course MORE UPDATES!
~:l i'm kidna wanting to set Sesshomaru on fire! though i'm pleased that he stopped and that his body reaccted to it as well! b/c i would be rather pissy if he pressed on >:l
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