Really love the story.....I really enjoy Sess being in debt to Kags...She's a spitfire and I love how she stands up to him
Great update! Welcome back! It is always a treat to read your stories and this one peomises to be really good!
The setting is very original! I don't think I have ever read anything with a setting like this one, so I am really curious to see which direction this goes to. Sesshomaru is very much in character and I love the fact that all his evil plans puff out in smoke before his eyes!
The phrase "he popped a stiffy every time he thought about it" had me laughing so hard I almost fell of my chair! I haven't hear that phrase in so long! But the moment I read it I was rolling with laugther! The mental image was too much for my poor brain! Right on the spot I pictured Sesshomaru hiding behind some trees, loking at Tetsuaiga... All of a sudden you hear him groan while slowly looking down, where he is pitching a massive tent! >_< LOL!
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! LG
lara (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Jan 2011
I'm dying to see what happens next. I don't understand why Sessh has such a hatred for Kagome that is unusual.Aggravated I could understand but attempting to think of things that are dishonorable is just odd, he didn't even act that way when his arm was cut off & he was injured & found by a child so I can't see him acting that way & talking to someone in such a manner. Silence from him in this condition while being contemplative about what was to happen ....I could see him expecting a wait a see attitude if she was doing this to get something from him but by this time I would think he'd seen enough of her to realize that wasn't her way...plus the fact that with his awareness he would be more than aware of her aura & the enormous purity in it & in her scent. He is also usually overly aware of the intent of others & can smell when someone is being dishonest so he would be more than aware of the fact that she wasn't lying & that no matter how he saw other beings he knows she doesn't judge others that way & has an adopted full youkai kit. From the fact that you have described that the whole tachi has already been collected then by now he has Rin & so I'm confused about his bizarre outward behavior at this point. Of course this is your story & you can make everyone how you want so please don't mind me I'm just trying to get a visual & a point in time when this would be happening & relate what I know from what I'm reading & being that this FF I really shouldn't. I'm sorry. I'm just a big fan of Sessh & Kagome & to see him with such an overwhelmingly disgusted view of her at a point that seems so deep into the story when I figure he'd be aware of the fact that she doesn't smell as other humans of this era & her knowledge is more extensive than people,especially women, of this time along with the fact that everything she carries from the drinking bottle ,pain pills,her clothing & other objects along with everything in her bag & the way she speaks are so obviously out of place,since they are all from the future ( & 500yrs makes her belongings obviously,undeniably odd) & with his curious nature,extreme awareness of his surroundings & the beings in them that with him at this time especially being enclosed in such a small place alone with her anything he hadn't noticed before he'd be extremely focused or at least aware of at this point.
The whole kidnapping plot and silliness has lead to me keeping watch for this fics updates. -I really laughed when Kagome kick him in the nads. Excellent work XD
lara (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Jan 2011
Oh I want to see what happens now. I need more please update soon. Since this is a Sessh & Kagome site that means in this story they end up together as a couple am I right???? I hope so cause that's what I'm hoping for
Oh, this is too funny. She nailed him good. I love it. Can't wait for more!
I got a huge chuckle out of Kagome's hellcat struggles against Sesshoumaru, especially when she kneed him right in the family jewels.
I hope you plan on restoring his arm sometime during the story. I did not like that part of the anime.
Two words...WELCOME BACK!! I read this story on AFF and enjoyed every word. Can't wait to read more of it. *huggies*
OMG! -cries- I am so glad you came back! Dokuga wasn't the same without you!!! And I can get updates on your fics again without pesterfying you! Sooooo happeh! XDDDDD
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