loved the endeing. it made me laugh, Inuyasha and his brother getting on eachother's nerves as usual.
Wow, what an awesome story! I love the synergy between Sesshomaru and Kagome, and how hooked he was after! I've also heard that song before, and you tied it into the story perfectly! Your writing is epic, and I can't wait to read the sequel!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
| that was awsomly ironic. but none the less it was awsome i hope the sequel is just as good.")
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
| I am so freakin' happy you posted this here! It's a fav of mine on ff.net.
I read this a while ago, on AFF, I think. Yay for Finger Eleven! Paralyzer is a great song, and I think you wrote this beautifully, although, the one thing I have to say is that it kind of drags on. The only big thing I have to comment on, is the use of boldness to punctuate words. The only thing I'll say is this: how many books do you read that stress words with bold? No offense, of course. I'm just a writing perfectionist.
Otherwise, it's really good. I'm glad I read it.
~ Incomprehensible
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
Oh i love this one!
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
It was great to read this again! And I loved the sequel. I'm a very big fan of all of your work.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
Amazing one-shot. I plan on reading the sequel as soon as it's finished, so if you could let me know, it would really help :) I enjoyed this story from start to finish, great job.
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