Hm! Very interesting. I was really sure that Sesshomaru was the model since he was trying to 'get away from the fame', which was mentioned in a previous chapter. I'm thinking that 'Omar' could be Shippo or something XD A demon in disguise!
Anyways, great job with the story, it's intriguing and entertaining. Hope to see an update soon!
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Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
The story so far is amazing. I cant wait for the next chapter!
I love your twist I am really wondering how this is going to play out!!!
PLEASE i beg of you... Update soon?:D
elphant (Chapter 4) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
| nice I like :) can't wait to read wat happens next.. I was sure dat sesshy was d model.. d other demon is just a stand in rite?? Newaiiz update soon <3
Megan (Chapter 4) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
I must say this is intresting, is Sesshomaru and Omar the same person? I mean it does seem that way I think I hope you update soon!!!
looks good .
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Megan007
Megan (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
Intresting Chapter so far!! I stared laughing hard when I read "walking STD" yes indeed they are!! hehehehe, well some clebs are, people as beautiful as that can have any girl they want sad really but it is true.
can't wait to read more!!!
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Hattaru.
Hmmm, I look forward to seeing where this will go.
I'm a rather curious type person and though since you said you changed the plot from your original idea, I have to ask, were you intending to do a prince and the pauper type theme? It does seem to resemble it seeing as Sessh and Omar are look a likes. Which also has me curious to know if Seesh has the stripes on his face and body also since you discribed Omar to have the facial markings.
Kagome does seem to be a rather pushy little thing where Sesshoumaru is concerned. I thought it alittle rude that she was being so personal (tickling him) after just meeting him. Still, I'm going to keep this in my favs so I know when you update. I do hope you have time to update on a frequent basis. JEN
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