I usually never review, and when I do, it's on a story that is extremely remarkable. I really like where you're going with this, but could you, maybe, update a little faster. I mean, once in two weeks is okay, not two months!
Eagerly waiting for more updates! A true masterpiece. Your language is commendable indeed, as is your style of writing, and putting everything together. LOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohh...goodness, now that's a beginning! LOL...I am so loving this story. Love how Sesshoumaru decided quickly to marry Kagome like that..lol...priceless. Please, please hurry with the next update. I have to know what happens next. And, if Kagome won't say yes..as fast..I will! LOL.
Black-Moon (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Feb 2011
I love this story! Completely Amazing!!!! I wish I could write like you.
Please keep up the good work! I'm dying to read the next chapter ^.^ Don't stop!!!!
Nilee1 (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Feb 2011
Can't wait for your next chapter.
Paige (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Feb 2011
I really like this. It's a unique idea. Can't wait until you update! :D
Darrakk (Chapter 2) - Wed 09 Feb 2011
Love it!
Thought proccesses are good. I can't wait to see where you take this, to watch them interact as they get to know one another. How they cope with the things you are likely to throw at them. Will it work out? Will Inuyasha reappear, if so will he be remorseful or brash? Will he try to take her back? To woo her again perhaps? Politics, family, love lost, to take the new chance or to give an old second? If Inuyasha even comes back. There is so much you could do, do hurry and take us through this story with you.
You simply must write faster, there is nothing else for it. Update soon please, and keep writing their thought processes. This story would be nothing without the ability to follow their thoughts, and you write it well.
More please.
jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Mon 17 Jan 2011
i really enjoyed this story its a good piece so far keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
Edina (Chapter 2) - Thu 13 Jan 2011
Oh wow! I'm captivated! You HAVE TO CONTINUE ASAP!!!! <3 <3 <3
Edina (Chapter 2) - Thu 13 Jan 2011
Oh wow! I'm captivated! You HAVE TO CONTINUE ASAP!!!! <3 <3 <3
Terry Lynn (Chapter 2) - Tue 11 Jan 2011
:O!! Update soon. I can't wait to see what you have in store with the two [and why InuYasha just bailed out].
amy (Chapter 2) - Sat 08 Jan 2011
SWEET STORY SO FAR , KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK WITH MORE UPDATES!
Just had to add one more thing. I was glad for all her reflections on the past. They were very informative and set the stage for whatever follows in her future. Also, the reader already has an insight on what type of person Inuyasha is and how stupid it was for Kagome to even consider marrying him. He would have been an abusive mate and too old to really make a lasting change.
I like the way you started this story. It really grabbed my attention. I am now eager for the next update.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Jan 2011
Okay, I'm hooked. Next chapter please!
Very nice, clear analytical exploration of Kagome's second thoughts about marrying InuYasha. I can't wait for Sesshy's part!
A start that makes one want more ^^
This sounds really interesting. keep going.
Ths is extremely interesting. I'd like to know where it goes.
My only consern being all the thinking going on in the first chapter. I think it would be a bit easier to get though if it where broken up by a few more actions.
Please keep up the good work ^^ I look forward to your update.
Da Da Da Dummmmmm..... What a place to stop! :) Can't wait to see more!
amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Jan 2011
MORE UPDATES! ZWHAT IS HE GOING TO SAY?
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