I really like the simplicity of this chapter, speaking of the making love part. I feel like it wasn't smutty or lemony so they didn't 'fuck' it was beautiful and not exposing so it lead me to believe it was perfect(: I think a lemon this early would have ruined it.
See? This is what the GOOD writers do... they build their stories carefully, slowly, allowing relationships to develop fully before throwing the pair into the bedroom together (unless, of course, the premise calls for such). Still loving this story, still loving your writing, still so VERY glad that you're posting them here! Thanks MUCHO for all your hard work crafting these delicious bits of goodness for greedy readers like me!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Omg! I'm so glad that you finally had time to update this story ! -screams in delight- This is one of my favorite stories on here and I do believe that your doing an awesome with it and writing it . I adore this story since the first time I read it (have to read it more than once????) and I really hope you will continue to add more chapters to it when you get time. Have an awesome weekend!!
I thought that this was great! i don' think that they have moved too fast and I absolutely loved how you had it come about. looking forward to the next one!
I think this was well timed. Such a good chapter. And Inu is still obsessing? Can't wait to see how that turns out.
rose (Chapter 21) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
next chapter please
*squeel* /O\(>_<)/O\
This is soooo awesome of you to put up two chapters. Really grateful to read new chaps and can't wait for the next one.
Sesshomaru being scared just shows how much he truly cares for Kagome and the ending part certainly got me all awwwww! They are sooo cute together and hope to read more kawaii moment's of them
Hey, this chapter came quick. Two chapters in one day! How cool. Anyway, it was a sweet chapter but poor Sesshomaru. He had the scare of a lifetime and did not appreciate it, but who could blame him? If anything the experience let him know exactly the depth of his feelings for her. Oh and I thought the whole accident scare and him needing the reassurance was a very good way to get their first time up for us. That type of situation is a good way to go about having an earlier then planned intamicy scene.
Now then. We hear from Inuyasha even if it is just a mention of him. I wonder what he could want with her....besides the obvious of apparently wanting her and Kikyou. I wonder if he's spoken to his father yet. Although I imagine not since I can't see their father leaving it only at words to get him to stop trying to get at Kagome. Can't wait for more. =)
Kat (Chapter 21) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
2 new chapters in a week? You're going to spoil us! :)
I think the moment happened at the right time. They've been ready for something to happen... and frankly I could not have imagined a more interesting way of bringing it about.
Update soon.
hahaha, Kagura is so stupid, lol
I love how Kagome and Rin changed his day from hell to good
I'm so glad to see an update to this loveliness
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Bounce (Chapter 20) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
I have been grinning ear to ear reading this story. It is incredibly adorabe. I just love it. Can't wait to read more.
I totally loved the new chapter you updated! Your writing is so sweet and brought a smile to my face! ^_^ Can't wait to see what you come up with next~
Late but great, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
How can i say this the right way....um............well it's just that
I FREAKING LOVE THIS!
More please.I would die very unhappy if you didn't finish this.And thank you for posting this:-)
Midian (Chapter 20) - Fri 10 Jan 2014
About freaken time only took 3 years, I cannot wait till june fopr the next installment.
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