Awww this was so good!!!!! So sad and yet so full of hope. I'm glad he let her in to help him, even though it was hard. You did a great job on this!
Beautifully written and so accurate. I can only imagine the horrors wars have on soldiers and the painful memories shown. Love the story!
amy (Chapter 3) - Mon 06 Jun 2011
Excellent fanfic, joyful, dramatic, and eventually complete for both partners!
Oh my goodness! I was almost in tears! PLEASE update soon! I loved the last chapter!
Hope you have a great week!
~~Mizuko~~
Wow I love this! I almost cried with her. I hope you update soon even if it was only created to help with the writer's block. I can hardly believe this is the first angst you've composed!
Have a wonderful week!
~~Mizuko~~
GG (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Jan 2011
why!? i was all ready for this cute little romance and them being all like I MISSED YOU SO MUCH! LETS GET MARRIED!
but then he he told her to go away! :( i cry tears! so sad
i hope he comes to his senses and realizes that she doesnt care how many people he's killed.
sigh
well done my friend :)
update soon!
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