You are really good with your words and imagery. Truly. I felt my breath hitch after reading the first prompt; fireworks. I could just imagine the scene and Kagome's shyness. The scene was so unbearably adorable I felt butterflies in my stomach. To come up with this drabble in such a short time for a challenge is really impressive. I would really like to see this drabble turned into a chapter story. I would love you for that. But then again, this sweet and short drabble are what makes you imagine what more can happen.
You deserve a round of applause for creating this heart warming drabble. I am so glad I found this jewel from DRG! This was amazing to read and find! Thank you for writing this! You truly weave your words to bring out the most beautiful image in such a short amount of words. I don't know how you do it!
How sweet. This warms my heart :)
Although, I wonder how these two got the bad fortunes at the same time... *laughing madly* That is too hilarious.
Sesshomaru's also a sneaky inu, stealing kisses from Kagome, steal it from me, instead! (wait, what?)
Anyway, I miss you, Aimee, and hope you'll come back as soon as possible! I wish you a very good luck on your real life :)
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