I really like how you have written this in each others POV. It gives it more an emotional balance of the characters and you can truly "feel" what InuYasha has lost and gained. Very well written! I can't wait for Sesshomaru's POV to be able to "feel" what he's going through too. Great job!!
Violetcarson (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 May 2008
*sniffle* So unbelievably fluffy! I love it!!!! LOVELOVELOVE!!!!!!! I also really like the emotion that you described with InuYasha's POV. Great job! I can't wait for Sesshoumaru's POV!!!!!!
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