Does the brand just increase one's powers or is it a completely new power given? I do like that we get to see Kagome coming into them, as painful as it might be. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Interesting plot!
One issue I haven't figured out yet: Inuyasha seems to be pretty apathetic toward Kikyou and paying a lot of attention to Kagome... not that I don't think the whole thoughtlessly ignoring Kagome whenever Kikyou shows up is over exaggerated in many stories, but was he OK with Kikyou being destroyed by the spell, did he think Kikyou would be able to wield the power and survive, or was he planning on both of them dying and going to hell together?
So far, Kikyou seems pretty incidental. Maybe the explanation will be revealed as the story unfolds?
Ivy (Chapter 10) - Mon 09 Jul 2012
Love this story, I can not wait to see where you go with it.
Nilee1 (Chapter 10) - Sun 08 Jul 2012
Definite yes on this chapter.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
amy (Chapter 9) - Wed 23 May 2012
keep up the excellent work, and please finish this story!
I like how sesshomaru and kagome are in this story, inuyasha in and the others make me so mad lol nice job.
amy (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Apr 2012
I like the story, it is interesting he is training her in pain management that took him years or even decades to learn to stop Naraku,since he is so impatient, she is human not youkai and even he had difficulty learning the method he teaches!
Venita (Chapter 5) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
Great story, please update soon.
Lumi (Chapter 5) - Sun 22 Jan 2012
I've certainly never seen anything quite like this before. Very interesting. Your character portrayals so far have been quite good, but I have to wonder what happened to the rest of Sesshomaru's group, as well as Shippo and Kirara. It seems odd not to mention them.
But I'm nitpicking. Your writing style and descriptions are enjoyable and I look forward to seeing more.
You're doing a really good job of conveying the characters and I like you're writing style. I really like the premise and you're carrying it off well.
Cherry (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Dec 2011
Oi! What a beginning!I'll be lurking around, waiting for more..... Great job.
anonesque (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Dec 2010
Good. You got my full attention :D
Oh wow! This fic is really interesting so far. So it choose her because she was alive, and is it still a threat to her life at any moment or just the beginning? Well can't wait to read more.
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