This fic is simply AWESOME!!! Thank you for your contribution to my entertainment. Please continue with your writing and I will contiue with my readin of your writing. <LOL>
This story was a really good read & way to short. I hope it isn't a one shot. I would love to read this as a story. I also can't help but wish now that if you're giving us all this info you'd at least let us know if the pups they'll have will be hanyou or not. I don't know what to think about the Sessh in your story ,that's why I wish it was longer so we'd know the fine details,missing info & all the answers & explanations for the questions that came to my head as I read this brief story that told alot but left out enough info to make you wonder & wish for more.
Of course all of those things are just some of the reasons why I love ff. In your story I can only wonder if Sessh was aware of this strong pull from Kagome that attracted him from the very moment she first came throught the well, had him drawn to her so strongly that he followed her with a need to be near her,couldn't fathom being with another female & his acceptance of all this leaves me wondering if the Sessh in your story is also one with a well known hatred of humans. I would like to know what the Sessh in your story was like...did he have no opinions against humans in general , just a dislike of Inuyasha from what transpired in the past you gave them or in your story are Miko's considered different from humans.
I don't know where the thought came from but what if Priestess's & Monk's were human but Miko's were beings that weren't mortal but more like Youkai except with holy powers & if ..................maybe I should shut up
i think there's some syncing issues with where things are placed in the story, like the summry cutting into it at the end? but otherwise i love this!
Great story, one thing though: the word you are looking for is vile, which means reveolting or digusting, not "vial" which means a small container of sorts, usually glass...
Good job,
Kari Konoko
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