Awww, poor Kags.  Oh well she ended up getting the better of the two brothers.  That was an upside.  Anyways I really hope you make a companion to this peice.  Please. :)

This was REALLY awesome! Really, great job! Thank you for sharing this :)

However, the paragraphs are reallly long, if you separated them more they'd be easier to read!

this was good but theose are some REALLY big paragraphs, it would be easier on us readers if they were a bit smaller. and broken up some.

oh wow! this is amazing! it so good! really well done!

Wow... All I want for Christmas is... *sigh*....

Nicely written!