| ha take that sesshomaru, next time dont be such a jerk! im curious to see how you mend things between them good job :)
Daniel (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Jun 2008
| I'm really honored you dedicated that last chapter to me, thanks! It does answer my questions, thanks for the update. Once again another great chapter. I like the fiery Kagome a lot.
| I love your modern twist on Kagome & Sesshomaru. Nice cliffy. Keep up the good work!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Jun 2008
| Wow! It looks like Sess has his work cut out for him... i think when pigs fly...that's when Sess will be forgiven. :P
Daniel (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Jun 2008
| I'm sorry I didn't leave my name, I don't have an account yet and I'm a guy. Thanks for responding. I do apologize for the assumption that one can't be a goth and a business person, I know better than that as I have a friend who is a goth and works in corporate America. I'm sorry if I gave you the impression that I thought goths were anti-social, that's not what I meant at all. In the first chapter you said that she wasn't "a talker, she was a listener," so I was just wondering what made her change and speak so openly with Toga is all. Great second chapter!
Musouka (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Jun 2008
| You Know ... I Like Your Story Its Realli Nice ... Finally A Story Where Inu No Tashio Is With Sesshomaru's Mother And Not Inuyasha's ... Well Can't Wait To Read More!
| I love this story.Great plot.
but it can't end just there!Please write much more!
| You can't just end it there! There has to be more! I'm really really liking this story. I like the format your using too. You don't use over-flowy words to make it seem to be more than it is, but use plan casual language. Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more!!
Kate (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008
| This is a great story, the plot is good the way it's written is great too. Please update soon, i'll be waiting
(Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008
| This is a great start! I'm excited to see where it goes from here. Just got a couple of questions. How did Kagome transition from being a goth to a business person? What kind of training did she have to do this? Not only that, Kagome was originally not a talker so it makes it really hard to believe that on her first meeting with Toga she would blab all of her life secrets. I think there should have been better transitions from each point in the story. In references to business you would usually use "corporation" and not "incorporation."
| Cool story so far, I like the direction your taking. Please update soon:)
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