consuelo marquez (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Jul 2014

i was reading this story (duh, obviously) and it reminded me of the short story by raold dahl "Lamb to the slaughter". i dont know why. maybe it was because (if you read it) at a first glance, no one knows why the main character did what they did. although, i dont think that im going to understand some parts of your story anytime soon, but i'll go back right now. anyways, this was really different. it was "surreal" and a somewhat "psychological thriller" if that makes any sense.  loved it and great work


Anonymous (Chapter 6) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

Hmmm ... I don't NEED happy endings. If a happy end doesn't fit it's just that. I do like them better, but if the story doesn't make sense with a happy ending, I'm ok with a sad one. But this ending I really, really don't understand. It's like you ... I don't know, dropped a bridge on the husband? It would have been more logical if he just didn't return, but why on earth would she kill the dog? That makes no sense to me. She makes no sense to me :/ A pity, because I really think that you are a talented writer.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

Great story and the ending was sad.


Raven (Chapter 4) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

Hi,

I usually don't review but I felt very compelled to do so this time.  I thought the ending was extremely sad.  I suppose I did not get the sense that Kagome really wanted to forget her past so badly that upon remembering she would react so harshly as to kill the dog/messenger.  In all fairness, I am a sucker for  happy endings and this was an even sadder ending then I expected.  That being said, you are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading all your present and future stories.  Also, would, you consider writing an alternate ending for those of us who really love them? 

 


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 6) - Fri 22 Jun 2012

Oh gods.

Okay. 

*breathes*

I wasn't expecting a happy ending, not with the warnings and with the genre tags, but that...

I feel vaguely like it is a happy ending, even if it hurts, because even though it's over, there's always the next day for life, I suppose. Maybe it's overly sentimental, but I think if I didn't take something positive from endings like that, I would probably go stark raving mad. Conversely, I feel like it's the saddest ending in the world, and I want to cry, so I guess I'm not going to make much sense. Whichever it was (or both) it was a very powerful ending, and that is the highest compliment I can give anything. This whole story was a wonderful read, but the ending cinched it and made everything fall into place perfectly. Well written.


jk (Chapter 6) - Fri 22 Jun 2012

sorry no offence but dont understand ur story could u tell what it is exactly


KT (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Aug 2011

Oh my, poor Kagome. Well at least he says he will be coming back, and he won't be leaving her... I'm really really happy you wrote this chapter. Thank you! And please don't abandon it. It's a really good story. =) 

I really enjoyed this story so far! =) 


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Jan 2011

Wow, this is certainly interesting. I'm eager to read more!


kito (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Dec 2010

Now, that was a completely different text than what we normally see here. Very nice and quite professional. Didn't have that "beginner-writer-of-fanficiton-feel to it. You are building the suspence in a good way. The plot also moves along with good pacing.

I look forward to the next chapters. I'll definately be following this story.


Megan007 (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Dec 2010

Intresting story, I wonder who her husband is and why the dog is barking!!! I wonder who the dog is LOL JK>

 

Hugs

 

megan007

I hope you update soon.

 

Good chapter so far.

 

-_~

 


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