The sweet, innocent and little miko now has grown up: what will Sesshomaru do? (Apart from thinking "It's a dream come true!")
Very steamy so far! I hope you update soon. I figured Sesshoumaru liked it rough, but Kagome? Very refreshing.
celtictrinityknot (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Jan 2011
look forward to more
amy (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Jan 2011
MORE UPDATES, WHAT HAPPENS?
Autumn (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Dec 2010
I can't wait to see what happens next!
cannot wait to read more! ^-^
yum (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
sounds yummy wanna read more
It's nice to see a story in this fandom that will deal with the idea of the BSDM scene itself rather than just throwing it in for throwing it in's sake. I like what I see so far ^^
oh my goodness! MORE NOW! *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*
lara (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
I would like to see this become a story
*squees* MORE MORE MORE!
There is some very vivid, evocative writing in this first chapter. I really like your style of writing! I did notice just one little glitch. When you described the outfit Kagome wore to the club, her skirt was described as black leather and ruffled taffeta in the same sentence. I can't wait to find out how Kagome and Sesshomaru react to stumbling across eachother in such a different setting after all the centuries that have passed. Chapter two should prove to be extra interesting!
What a good start. I am interested to see where this goes. I like how through you are being with the definitions, instead of just assuming that everyone is familiar with the terms. I guess I could see Kagome doing something like this after having to be stuck back in her "plain vanilla" life. Too bad she doesn't want multiple partners, could you imagine her, Yuske, and Sess? Hmmmm....
Anyway! Update Soon!
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