Wait so the jewel is now outside her body?! Last chapter wasn't Inuyasha trying to too it out of her body?! And if she killed Miss centipede how'd it get out?! This is confusing

The father and mother part... It's a little ill placed since they just meet Shippo. The pacing if this story is a little weird. It's fast and slow but not in the right places. That's the best way I could describe it. It's still a good story so far, so I'm going to keep going for now.

Sword? There's already a sword? It's like it's following the original story but not quite. Which is obvious but the swords used to be too big of a detail to just change so drastically. When and where did he get this sword? Perhaps I missed this in the first chapter.

This is interesting though pacing seems a little speedy in terms of them falling in love in their sleep. The reviews have me a bit hesitant but so far this is well written and has my interest.

This was interesting but so much of it didn't seem to make sense. She was an untrained miko but she was involved in the battle. The jewel wasn't shattered but Kohaku was being kept alive by a shard. It spoke of sleeping bags and ninja snacks but unless she was carrying all of that when she went to paint the wellhouse and dragged into the past none of that should have existed with her in the past. None of the relationships were shown to develop and how long was she in the past to begin with? 

I'm confused. She is a miko in this but hasn't used any powers other than to fight back against mistress centipede, she has been there a while and has the ramen and ninja food but there hasn't been any mention of her going back through the well to the future at all.. Oh yeah...How did Naraku get the jewel from her?

I read this story years ago on fanfiction, I'm just leaving a review on this site. This story was awesome, amazing and it had a beautiful ending!

The plot would be nice if there was a little more meat on the bone. You've got a skeleton of a story. Sure it has a couple organs but for the most part it's just missing to much to keep it together.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oooh...I was sure that battle would have been the end...does that mean your going to do something horrible to our happy couple?  T-T why is there alway so much pain....sigh ty for updating

Nyuka

Poor Kanna. *wants to hug little void child*

Thanks for writing.

HA TAKE THAT NARAKU!!!  Though I feel sad for Kana it's about time Naraku knew he couldn't have Kagome, nener nener nener....lol 

-Nyuka

HaZa! a new chapter completed....and they are finaly Mated after waiting for so many years, and Now Naraku will die and everything will be good...no?  enjoying much this story!

Nyuka

i like it. though i wonder if jaken will put his foot in his mouth about sess' "mate"....