HOT! i really hope you do decided to add more to it. but even if you don't, it's an awesome one-shot. ^-^
Oooo, so are we going to see some of the Kagome attitude and fierceness? I can't see her just being okay with being his little toy just because he took care of her mom...at least not for long.
Patricia (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
that was so hot!!! would love some more chapters!
swiftdeath (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
well well well, turns out that humans are better than demons. hahahahah, victory is our! great story by the way, really enjoyed reading it :)
Seijaku (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
That was well written. The romantic in me was waiting for a different ending, I suppose, but I still enjoyed it. Very nice!
Margie (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
Steamy! I loved it! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
love it i would love to see this become a full chapter story. how well kagome take being a sex slave? will they fall in love and have pups? what happen if she does becaome with pup with just the one night? so would like to is so much more of this story it great.
addie
instyle (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2010
hey this would be a great chapter story....please keep updating!!
Anggie (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
lovelovelovelovelove!!!!!
sequelsequelsequelsequelsequel!!!!!
pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
love it! i hope you'll change your mind and decide to continue writing the story :)
sarah (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
I love it. but he never told her his name right..?
I am going to add this to my watch list. I like where it is going! great job!
Guardian_Pocky (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
I loved it so much~~ I want a sequel so badly!! x]]
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
I loved that!!! :D Great Job!!
O_O
I deMANDS you make more!
*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*
MORE!!!!!
*pounce syou*
♥
with ♥'s and sugar's on top!
kay (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Dec 2010
I loved it! I loved the plot and all! Very well written and smut was HOT!
I wish you could do a sequel. please with cherry on top ^^
Great! Even a little plot to go with the smut ;) Very well written, I'm sure this one will linger in my mind for a little bit.
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