Oh sooo funny and so true too!!! My daughter would learn sing those same songs over so often she reminded me of a broken record skipping.    and true to what happened with Sesshoumaru, tell her you've heard enough and she's start singing a new one...and grinning like a Cheshire cat!That child wasn't stupid. She knew very well we wanted her to stop singing, not find a different song...Kids are funny....Great chapter.

I'd just like to let you know that in Japanese you do not use plurals as we do in English. (if someone hasn't already mentioned)  Otherwise, this is the best Christmas gift they could give one another and it was so beautifully written. I liked how you mentioned Kagome's clumsiness. It's a good thing InuYoukai have such quick reflexes.

Awww, I just loved this!!! So, are these all related to the first one? I mean like in a story format, but done in oneshots?

Again, I see a few typos, but I've yet to read any that was totally perfect. You are doing fantastic!

You know, I honestly think it's a man thing when they don't let us know they've been injured until days later and it's infected, or in Kagome's case she happened to see the bandages that needed to be changed.

I enjoyed this one alot. Especially when he moved over and patted the side next to him and asked her to come and talk. Very sweet.

I liked this alot. I saw a few small errors, but nothing to slpit hairs over. I get the idea that Seesh and InuYasha seemed to both be considerating having Kagome for their mate and Seesh beat Inu in marking her, but I think you might think about furthering this into a chapter fic. I'd like to know how Sessh come to join the tachi and more than that how he got Kagome to agree to a mating, or was it just a mating mark without the phsyical union until she decides she wants more?

The idea for this fic was a nice one, and it's written pretty well. I caught one mistake in the first sentence, where it says "The cracking of knuckles caught the attention of two set of canine eyes". I think you should use sets , as there are two of them. I liked how Kagome was IC enough to agree to give it a shot after a while, but at the same time, she isn't overly passive and accepting, as some fics portray her. Keep up the good work!

Very cute beginning to the story.  Everything seems to flow nicely and move along at a good speed and no mistakes popped up at me hehe so keep up the good work :).

These were excellently done, and very christmasy. I loved how you made Sesshoumaru seem so nervous at the end of the third chapter, and then it turning out to be that it was his time of heat...phew what a lovely christmas present ;D. Keep up the good work!

Good job... little long but other than that I think it's great. May be you should write a longer story and add more detail... :)

Yup definately need more of this to read lol ^-^ I really like this and this was an awesome start to the story...lol update soon!
I really love Christmasy stories and it well it gets me into the holiday mood, so thank you for providing that feeling.

Aww, totally sweet and well thought out.  Loved this.

moh... wheres the rest?! you have such an awesome start here. I'd love to see where K/S relationship goes from here. There is so much angst already from the start, but clearly the potential for a deep love already brewing. A few grammatical errors, which looked more like speedy fingers getting away from the author (mind do this, too often lol) Hope you'll continue with this story.

For the most part I like this little piece... I would like more details but considering that this piece was supposed to be short, it is pretty good. If you ever do diside to write longer stories rewrite this one but with more details.

Wow, what a great start.  This was very well writtern and I liked the way it flowed.  It definitely leaves me wanting more I hope you update soon.