Alrighty then! Here is my review! Get ready!

One: I laughed, hard. The best part about it was I happened to be listen to a sad song while I read it, so making me laugh through that is an accomplishment!

I've never read Inuyasha, so I can't really tell you if you got the characters right! However, I thought you did a great job with character interactions and the read all together was enjoyable! I loved it!

Now, the bad part of reviews... Things I didn't like. I got a confused through it, though that may just be not knowing the series... But did you refer to Sesshomaru as a girl at one point...?
"“What? Why?” Kagome questioned, and he narrowed his eyes at her.

“I wish to know the reasoning for the extra scent.” Was her response, and she sighed, nodding."

Maybe i'm just nit-picking, but that line was a bit confusing. Sorry...

Since this is a one-shot, I can excuse the lack of detail, but I had a bit of trouble visualizing the scenes. I would try describing the setting more, but I'm very detailed oriented. (as you might find out when you read mine! ^.^ )

Over-all I give your story a solid 8! That's good for me! I'm usually picky especially with comedy! I loved it! The timing of the final joke made it all worth while! Very good job!

8/10

0.o.... ::achoo::

no  seriously..now I'M  overcome with the urge to sneeze...poor sess...his allergy's not catching, is it? ::rofl::