Reviews for Slavery by Marulover

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KyraTekak (Chapter 10) - Wed 25 Aug 2021

Really liking the story so far. 


random girl (Chapter 10) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

very good story, i really enjoyed readinging it so far and i hope the next chapters are going to be just as good as the ones you already posted. the only question i have is what happened to their father and inuyasha's mother since they we alive when sesshomaru left. it would be wonderful if they we both still alive or at least their father since i really love him and i feel like they might need his help to reclaim their lands. but that's just my opinion. keep up the good work and keep on writing!


Loveyaa (Chapter 10) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

I liked that you put a lot of emotion into it and I guess with the fact that this is new for Sesshoumaru and he is actually in love with Kagome he would be spouting his feelings throughout it all. I hope that this show of love will not be the last with the battle quickly coming upon them. I can't wait to see the good guys standing after this epic battle :)


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

It was perfect and really romantic. I love how she made him feel like he had never felt before.


(Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Apr 2011

Re: Jaken ears

No, she didn't let him have her virginity before, he just touched her in the hot springs and they've slept in the same bed but not had sex.  Then when he was healing her both times.  I wanted to make when they mated a big deal so everyone would love it.


Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Tue 26 Apr 2011

i loved it very nicely done:)


Jaken ears (Chapter 10) - Mon 25 Apr 2011

didn't kagome give him her virginity earlier in the story????


Loveyaa (Chapter 9) - Wed 20 Apr 2011

I never thought that Sesshoumaru would be so open and giving of his emotions and feelings...but I guess to make her feel better he would or even to ensure that she stays his. the big bad battle is coming up and I feel like that will def add some drama to everybody's life. Although I guess with the upcoming battle that means the upcoming mating is closer too. I can't wait for them to finally be together so that nobody can tear them apart. That makes me nervous...and Kagura still does. Well I can't wait to see what other madness takes place :)


Sunset Senshi (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

Another wonderful chapter , continues to poke my interest wahhhh I cant wait what happens next . I hope Kagura gets a taste of her own medicine >:|


KEdakumi (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

Ahhh... Kagura's going to be the wicked witch to the west, isn't she?  Looking forward to the next chapter.


utsuro-san (Chapter 8) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

update pleaseeee! ;o

i love this story, it makes me warm and fuzzy on the inside :')


Loveyaa (Chapter 8) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

And they're just one step closer. I wonder how things will turn out between trying to gather an army, hold off kagura, and then mate with Kagome. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


lara (Chapter 8) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

Thanks for the chapter update. It was great .Now I just fear Kagura & what she'll do to Kagome or Sessh to destroy their love.I can't say more but I look forward to your next chapter.


luv u so much (Chapter 7) - Mon 31 Jan 2011

love u! love this fic! love where its heading so far!

luv it, luuuuuuv it!!!! :)


Brittany (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

Very good. I'm shocked to see that she would take his punishment but its very clear how much she loves him and wants to keep him safe. Please update soon.


lara (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

Yeah !!!!!!!!that was great. I hope she grabbed all the money she had available as smart as both of them are I can't see that they wouldn't remember to do that so I'm sure they should have enough to take care of themselves for a while & I'm sure they packed both of their clothing. Where are they going to go now??? They have to find his people or family or Youkai Royalty that they can trust that also know about what Naraku did & hate him & organize to retake the Western Palace & lands. I'm sure the people in the land now being controlled by Naraku are suffering because that is how he is & they would probably do anything & be willing to fight to reinstate Sessh & his family so I imagine that shouldn't be hard once they know who to find & where to go.I think the first thing they need to do is get somewhere safe where  Sessh can get his full powers back & get as strong as possible & mate, of course,especially now that they started the process their bodies will crave each other till it's completed...he still has to take in some of her blood too & then during sex when they peak he bites her neck marking her & that's the final part of the youkai mating process fusing their hearts,bodies, minds & souls ...I believe & unless there is no love involved & if it is a political mating than I guess the hearts not a part of it but if love is involved then the mating bond is stronger & the way these 2 were drawn together it's almost like they were soul mates or destined to be together

you didn't tell us if Naraku was punished for attacking her with a knife,cutting her & attempting to rape her

I can't wait to see what you write next


Loveyaa (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

WOw!! What a jump from them being together yet still both slaves to the rules and then both freed and running away together. I can't wait to see what happens next and how their lives will turn out from here. I mean are there such things as free youkai? I guess I'll just be waiting to see if they get their happily ever after :)


Sunset Senshi (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

YOU'RE EVIL ! I thought it was going to be good lol but no ou had to put in a twist .... how cunning and genius of you ! I can not wait for the next chapter ! I keep falling in love with this story more and more ! Amazing plot line I hope they can get away this time .... PLEASE ?! lol


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

Gah! That was so cute and sweet! <3 I can't wait for the next chapter! =D

Have a fabulous week!

~~Mizuko~~


Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

OMG, I cant wait to see what happens next, I have butterflies in my stomach.


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