"And I will update again soon! Seriously, I'm on spring break, and I'm going to force myself to write as much as possible. You'll have another chapter within the week. I'm going to go work on it as soon as I post this one, actually."
Awesome. I never ever, ever thought os this!! Please, please UPDATE SOON.
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I am so glad you updated this story! I thought you had given up on it. It is so well written, and I love the storyline. The names were confusing before, but it's all good now. I love stories where Kagome gets thrown further back in time, and I can't wait to see what you come up with. Please, update again soon! One question: Will Kagome get to meet InuPapa soon?
very interesting so far, I don't think I've read a fic where Kagome was Midoriko ((also, Chinatsu called her 'Kagome' once, just thought I'd let you know, easily overlooked assuredly, but if you wanna fix it, chapter five I think it was))
higan (Chapter 7) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
Loved your action moment w kagster.. t'was wonderful! kept me on the edge of muh seat lol!! i loved how u described the bandit death.. i could see it.. so that means u did great!
short and sweet this time..
i cant wait for the next installment!!
I really like this story, but it is rather confusing. First, when Kagome met Cho, she told her to call her Midoriko. Then, in the last chapter and this one, Chiantsu was calling her Midori. Also, at one point in the 4th chapter, Chiantsu called Kagome 'Kagome'. So, now, she'll be called 'Midoriko'?? SOoooo confusing!!!!!
higan (Chapter 6) - Mon 30 Mar 2009
u are now on my fav stories list!!!!
i love this twist! this story is so totally different and just wow!! i thought that u werent going to update the last time u came on, that was a LONG time ago. but this was awesome! and im sorry that i havent givin u a review.. but i am now..
i noticed in chapter 4 that u had them say kags actual name, and not midori.. and that was a bit confusing.. i guess its a typo or something.. so i had to re-read everything again to see if i missed something.. which didnt bother me at all.. since this story is awesome and wonderfully well written that i can read it.
so were is kilala anyways?? isnt she suppose to be midoriko's demon thingy??
well, still i was not expecting this, this AWESOME-ness that u did.. wow!! i will review from now on if that means it makes u happy!!..
Love the music, love the style, and love the plot so far!! I'm just in love lol!! Can't wait!! Oh Elegant_Paws (bows) is just the awesomest authoress ever!!
| woo-hoo! I saw an update and had to immediately read it. I know you mentioned a couple chapters previous that you were not going to be able to update as often due to school, but I was very glad to see an update. I also read that you didn't get many updates from the last chapter so i wanted to drop you a review. I loved that interaction that you had with Kagome and Sesshoumaru after he saved her from the river even though it was brief and I'm curious to see how he turned from that to the ice cold personality that we all know him for. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Kagome and Sesshoumaru and look forward to the romance aspect of their relationship. I hope all is going well with school and I truly look forward to more updates. Please keep up the good work!
Noacat (Chapter 6) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
Moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar. Srsly.
Katja87 (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Jan 2009
| I love your story! I read all the chapters in one night. Your attention to detail is so refreshing, and the way you are able to keep Sesshoumaru in character, yet still retain some of his youthful charm, is very impressive! I can't wait to read more!
Nyuka (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Nov 2008
| TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! Awsomeness extreme times infinity....XD....Gosh I loved that movie and I soooooooooooooooooo believe they made though quota to make New Moon......To bad we have to wait till next year..sob* T-T.....I could read that series over any day....lol....ok on to you fic XP ......I soooooooooo guessed that you where going to Make Kagome Midoriko as soon as you had Cho call her Midori...I was just too close I figured some where down the line it would gain the 'ko'......and WOW Sesshy finally made his interence....he's the one those not so innocent furry animaly creatures, that nocked Kagome into the well, are reporting back to hu...it has to be him....Ok it doesn't Haaaaaaaaaaaaave too but it is...XP why because I said so (just watch just because I said that you'll change it...lol)....love to see updates.........Nyuka
Hey, VioletCarson.
I was going through the fanfiction archives and guess what? I found you! I like where you've gone with the story so far, although, I think you could have dredged it out a little longer. Uhhm... revealing that Kagome is Midoriko and that Midoriko is Kagome was a little too soon, though. Quintessentially, though, it's a good story. Very raw, but good.
I have a question: do you use a beta? No offense, I'm not saying that your stuff isn't good, but I'm just curious.
Anyways, one thing that I really noticed, before everything else, was that you use longer paragraphs. They're okay, just not in abundance. I'd suggest shortening them some, but it's your choice.
The other thing I noticed is that you tend to break up paragraphs in the middle of one person's speech. When you do that, you should always, always, always use quotations at the beginning of speech again. i.e. "Talktalktalktalktalk.
"Talktalktalktalktalk." And so on and so forth.
Uhhm... the last thing that kind of really bothered me was the author's note in the middle of the chapter. I dun't know about you, but I don't like to have to put the story aside mid-read to listen to what the author has to say, no offense. I just think author's notes should be limited to top and bottom of the page, either before, and/or after writing. But that's just me.
It's really short, but good. I can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds really good.
~ Incomprehensible
Ah, at last, our favorite Lord appears. He sounds different by the way, I'm intrigued (an intrigued Hikari-chan is a happy hikari-chan XD)
Good writing, as always. I look forward to the next chapter.
Dewa mata
MoniQ (Chapter 4) - Thu 27 Nov 2008
| You are very mean, leaving us on a cliffy and after soooo long, meanie, but i am loving the new developments, you had me hanging i thought it would ahve been Inu no Taishou not sesshomaru,
and once more i Cant wait for the next chapter!
MoniQ
Aly (Chapter 4) - Thu 27 Nov 2008
Yes it has been a while, but I'm just glad you've updated this. I definately got excited when I saw that you had posted the next chapter. Anyway, loved the ending XD. I could just see chibi internal Kagome running around in circles with her hands above her head screaming, like a chicken with its head chopped off. After that reaction would come the hair pulling, and the 'shit-shit-shit-shit!!!!' followed by 'omg-omg-omg-its sesshomaru-omg-omg-omg-i'm going to die-but he doesn't know me-but i'll probaby say something and then he'll kill me-omg-omg-omg-but he saved me-omg-omg-the world is ending!-...my brain hurts..' gotta love the internal freak outs XD. Anyway, now that I've had fun wreching havic on Kagome's mental state, I hope you update soon. Bye Byez XD
Sesshoumaru's Lady (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Sep 2008
| WOW! This is a great story so far! I can already tell that this is a classic in the making. I even watched your youtube video, which by the way was very good... I like it so far because like the mini summary suggested you would never expect it... It will be very interesting how you plan to include the making of the shikon jewel as midoriko was the base of it, her soul is part of it along with the demons she fought and then how to integrate it so that Kagome goes back to either the feudel era or the modern era. Also how you plan to integrate Sesshoumaru into it. Yup, a classic in the making. I'm very excited to read more from you and hope you update soon! Keep up the great work!
Whisper (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Sep 2008
| You got this one's attention. The youtube trailer was very well done. Very intriguing twist with Midoriko. This one eagerly awaits an update.
| Wow. Really interesting plot twist! I didn't see it coming...Kagome wouldn't happen to be Midoriko, would she? I can see that happening in your story, Kagome getting pulled back into time just to find out she shaped the future for everyone! Ha, I wonder what's going to happen next? I really want to know who those three voices in the first chapter were!! Grrr, it's frustrating me! Well, you have me hooked, keep up the good work!
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