*throws a party* YOU UPDATED!!!!!! I'm so glad to see Broke isn't dead! Nice chap, btw, great cliffy! I'm looking forward to the next update!
I love your story! It's clever, witty, and amusing! I can't wait for more!
Welcome Back! Was thinking about your wonderful FanFic just the other day.
Really enjoying you writing Kagome finally coming out of her shell. Looking forward to Kaeda's total explanation also as to why she has not trained Kagome... though I believe I already know the answer to that. Kudos to bringing that angle up and looking forward to more of this wonderful Fic.....
Whee! I am sooooo happy to see a new chapter! <3
I really like this story-- the character are portrayed well, and your original character (eagle boy) is balanced and fun =] I've been looking forward to where this story was going, and you have not disappointed with this new chapter.
You were worried about a decline in your writing, but the chapter really flowed. I read it so fast that if there were any typos or grammar mistakes I didn't notice them XD not that that is any help to you if they're there ><
Either way, it was greatly enjoyed; a perfect way to start off my morning ^___^
~Zero
P.S.
If this has already popped up my apologies. I haven't written a review in a while and couldn't remember if the 'type this character name' was Inu Yasha, or Inuyasha >< curses.
Yeah I'm sure Kikyo will have no trouble giving "her" half back.. >.>
Therein lies the answer! I'm glad you started updating again! The mystery you've presented is very intruiging to read! Keep up the great work!
Dun dun dunnnnn! I feel the plot thickening here!
Nice chapter sweetie and welcome back! *huggles*
SQUEEEEEEE-NESS!! You're BACK! You make WORDS!! Lots and lots of loverly WORDS!!!!!!!
Despite what you may think, I feel you're doing quite admirably - especially considering the length of your hiatus. KEEP IT UP!
:D
~~me~~
Great story, keep it coming.
Maybe Inuyasha and her can be classmates. I can see her doing better than him and him trying even harder to out-do her. Then they both win. more or less. I like Kagome's determination. Sometimes enough is enough. Hopefully Sesshoumaru has another thing coming. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I'm sorry, THIS is where your story diverges from canon? Not every single chapter, detail about tenseiga and how Sesshoumaru acquired it, the O.Cs, or virtually everything else???
Don't get me wrong, this is a very interesting story and I love it, but this story diverged at the start and has been shooting off ever since!
^____________^ About time she stood up and dusted all that depression off. Kag's side of this story is finally catching up to the progression that's in Sesshy's side. Look forward to more =]
Ohhhh training time! Yay!
Although, I'm waiting for the moment when she gets over the eagle and notices the fluffy one >>
It'd been such a long since there've been any updates for this story! So happy there's a bunch of new stuff for it! Since you mentioned the next part going to be different from the snippets I figured I should give a review for the last few. =]
You're very good at prompt writing, of putting those little words/concept into so small a passage. Good on ya
Having the ups and downs of the relationship between kags and inuyasha was nice to read. Just laying it all out there made me smile and frown, accordingly.
Twas good, now must finish reading.
Wohoo, a trained Kagome! That is always a good development for her, I think! Looking forward to how it pans out! ;3
Yay! It's been so long! I love "It Broke". I'm glad you're back. This is a nice treat with finals going on, and I love how Kagome is portrayed. It feels like the kagome of the series. Not weak, not strong, and still a teenaged girl. I love it!
YES! become bamf Kagome, become BAMF! And then make them eeat your duuuust bwahahahahaha.
Wonder what will get Kagome out of her funk. It is hard being a teenage girl, but she does seem to be able to think about the good and bad times and realize her role in them. First step to fixing something that's broken. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Oh gosh, I just love this! Update, update, update!!
Yay! Updates, updates!
I gotta love your story... You didn't really tell much in those chapters, but still, it was a pleasant read ;)
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