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Samantha (Chapter 14) - Sun 13 Nov 2016

What happens next?


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 14) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

WOW. O_O Finlar is sure going to have some story for the Elders when he get back. WOW. Saved by two gods and getting to talk to them as well. That doesn't happen to just anyone!

I'm so glad Shippou is back with his parents now.

ohmyGOSH! I love everything that's come to light with Rukaze! :pause: Did Ameratasu happen to save him too? hm... I'll have to reread that passage with a fine tooth comb. Or wait for it to be spelled out in subsequent chapters. I hope he's alive. It would stink to find out so much awesome stuff about him just to lose him.

High Ones, but Sesshomaru is going to be upset with himself when he finds out about Kagome's death. :cough: understatement :cough: Then again... when it comes to light that she ISN'T dead I expect to see some ooc joy on his part!

Glad you're feeling better. Hope things continue to look up.

Thanks for writing!


TruGemini (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 Apr 2011

Wonderful story. Not every chapter need to be action packed. This chapter flows within the story as it should. So, the chimes are draining her of magic each time she purifies a shard? So once she purifies the jewel, will all beings lose magic? Will the Chimes distort it and be released back into the world? Excited to see what happens!


Amber (Chapter 10) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

hmmm...and so the plot thickens! I don't know if I like how everything now has a name...how you named the land and the 'lamials'. For me, it took away from the stories somewhat, almost as if you had put a seperate language in the story..So for me, I was somewhat confused and had to use context (sort of) to understand what you were talking about. I really am still enjoying the storyline though! thank you for sharing this with us !


Amber (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

So far I've liked the story but I'm not sure how I feel about the parts that remind me of Garth Nix's books. I've never read a fanfiction with them involved...I guess I'll just have to keep reading!=]


(Chapter 10) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

Oh my word! I am freaking out, I've gone and lost my notebook! I've been searching everywhere I can think of looking for it. I checked my parent's house, my work, my friend's house, and every inch of my car! Shit, I'm even having nightmares about not finding it.

That notebook is so very important to me, I compose every chapter right there in that notebook so that I can get my thoughts in order, and plan out everything in the story. Without it, my chapters are going to be dull and you're gonna read it and not feel attached and connected to the story. I've tried writing without it, the first chapter was composed without the notebook, and you can tell the differences as I continue to plan first in my notebook.

So I'm actually stressing out now.

Silly me! And I had just purchased that norebook as a replacement notebook because I filled up the last one.

Wish me luck, I'm going to keep searching for it. (sobs)

Selenay of Antioch


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Nov 2010

I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!

Have a great week!

~~Mizuko~~


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Nov 2010

I like this so far the only problem I've noticed is "nee" is older sister... "nii" is older brother........


JeniNeji (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Nov 2010

:)

What do you think?

I do hope to gift you with a better drawing next time :)

 

Here is the link to the fanart:

http://www.dokuga.com/gallery?func=detail&id=4830


TruGemini (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Nov 2010

This story so far has been a truly great adventure. I am excited about seeing where this leads and what further may happen. Keep up the great work!


amy (Chapter 9) - Wed 17 Nov 2010

MORE UPDATES!


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

Btw, can you send me the details of how Kagome looks? Does she appears human? Pointed ears?


JeniNeji (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

I do hope Shippo doesnt get hurt too badly :(

:) I just thought it wouldbe nice to drop by and review :)


REDWOLF (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

This is so great. Sesshomaru is finding himself a plot.


Yamiyo (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

I love the story so far and hope you continue it. I also thought you might like to know youve had kagome calling Sess sister not brother. Here a the terms-

Older Brother:
Onii-san / Ani
(pronounced o-NEE-san, anee) (Japanese: ??????)
(the first when addressing your own brother or talking about someone else's [honorific], the second when you are talking to someone else about your own brother)

Older Sister:
Onee-san / Ane
(pronounced o-NEH-san, aneh) (Japanese: ??????)
(as above)

Younger Brother:
Otouto (pronounced "otOH-to") (Japanese ? )

Younger Sister:
Imouto (pronounced "imOH-to") (Japanese ? )

Cant wait for the next chapter!!


amy (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Nov 2010

KEEP GOING , YOUR DOING FINE < I LOVE IT! MORE UPDATES!


(Chapter 8) - Sun 14 Nov 2010

Heh, you're gonna love the next installment!

 

Things are going to become even more difficult not just for Kagome and Sesshoumaru, but for others as well.


JeniNeji (Chapter 8) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

Oww...:(

AT first, I was a lil bit scared of this story, thought I complelety love it, because I found some similarities with my plans for my story Contigo. But, not anymore... as this story progresses, the differences are noteworthy. I am even happier. I hope to continue reading this sory for the plot has robbed me of my free will, I feel like I NEED to read it :) And I love demon Kagome. I am trying to guess how the meetings are going to go... so difficult :(

 

Awesome job!


JeniNeji (Chapter 7) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

I absolutely love your story! ehem, sorry for the random reviews! I have hada busy day full of interruptions! Gods! I wanted to just 'read'.

 

:)


Tiemy (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

A great story... can't wait for the next update!


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