Nice short story

it was a lovely story and i'm glad i read it. c'ya'

Loved it

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this was great. wish there was more

AW, that was so cute. I can just picture his mother at baby's r us looking for toys in the future. I love when Sesshomaru asks a question about modern things it's so funny. I loved this story, i hope you write again soon.

This made me chuckle quite a bit...good job!

Great Start I love it!

lol poor kagome!

Ha love it... looks like she's exspecting a boy... it'd be so funny if it turned out to be a girl.

*giggles*

You appear to have difficulty with homophones, especially "threw" and "through"

lmao that's totally cute! " all my infant portraits..." hahahahahahahahaha

 I feel like you are rushing through things way too fast. This gives the impression that Sesshomaru is out of character. But the story has got a good plot, just try and slow things down. Good Luck and I will continue to read on.

MORE UPDATES, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

i likes this!

I like it a lot so far!!!!! I am really excited for more, I think this is going to be an awesome story!

^-^ yay!

please to be updating!

This is a really good start! I cant wait for the rest!

i think things are goin way to fast...but i like it please continue