SesshysRose,

Quite certainly,I'm shocked.Like really shocked.Poetic fics rarely caught my attention since some seems hard for readers to grasp it's message.And also the characters become out of character .But yours,was beautiful.You send the message and the story beautifully.By just an amount of words,you managed to make it so emotional.Kagome was a bit OOC but that doesnt matter.After all,we get to see the depressing side of hers.

Frankly saying,I enjoy this story.And I hope you'll make more of stories like this.Keep up the good work.

Sincerely.

Nakamura Chiaki

It's so sad, though... How Sesshomaru felt as he was dying.

However, I love it! It really makes me feel more emotional than any other story ^^