Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Jul 2016

To many goshes I honestly couldn't keep reading


SashaMarie (Chapter 7) - Thu 21 Apr 2011

great story thanks


appaloosa128 (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

You wanted to know how to spell a word: ecstatic.

Thanks


SashaMarie (Chapter 7) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

Soooo good. I love it, this story was AWESOME!!!!


mia (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Apr 2009
are you talking about kirara sango's little demon cat cause if you are that's how it's spelled i read inuyasha to much for my own good! ^_^

ygrayne (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Jan 2009

please write more it is very intersting


MontiK (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Jul 2008
The plot is really interesting! I like how it's playing out! If you are still looking for somone to help you edit I would be happy to help. You can email me at Squishymonti@sbcglobal.net

Night Fox (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
The plot seems really good so far, but I can't help but think that Sesshoumaru agreed a little to quickly. Also your writing seems a little choppy, like you were so eager to put it down that you didn't take a pause here and there to give a full view of the situation. There are a few words that weren't used right but I got the gist of things. A beta could help if you want one but I can't really say anything about that since I don't use one either. Other than those it's really good and I hope you update soon.

Bluemiko (Chapter 3) - Tue 01 Jul 2008
Great opening for your story. I'm very curious to see what happens next. Please update soon:)

Dark Phoenix (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 Jul 2008
Good story. There are a couple things that bother me though. You need to reread what you write or find a beta. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and misused words in the story. Another thing is the story is marked Complete when its not. =( i thought I could read the whole story but its not even halfway done. I'm ready to cry. *sniffles* Don't take what i said the wrong way. I really like your story and I hope you update soon. Snaps for Blossom Love =P

Drea (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
Good beginning chapter. Don't feel like you need to explain yourself to readers. (Ex. the Tokyo floor measurement.) Can't wait to read more about the characters!

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