You wanted to know how to spell a word: ecstatic.
Soooo good. I love it, this story was AWESOME!!!!
mia (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Apr 2009
are you talking about kirara sango's little demon cat cause if you are that's how it's spelled i read inuyasha to much for my own good! ^_^
ygrayne (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
please write more it is very intersting
MontiK (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Jul 2008
The plot is really interesting! I like how it's playing out!
If you are still looking for somone to help you edit I would be happy to help. You can email me at Squishymonti@sbcglobal.net
The plot seems really good so far, but I can't help but think that Sesshoumaru agreed a little to quickly. Also your writing seems a little choppy, like you were so eager to put it down that you didn't take a pause here and there to give a full view of the situation. There are a few words that weren't used right but I got the gist of things. A beta could help if you want one but I can't really say anything about that since I don't use one either. Other than those it's really good and I hope you update soon.
Great opening for your story. I'm very curious to see what happens next. Please update soon:)
Good story. There are a couple things that bother me though. You need to reread what you write or find a beta. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and misused words in the story. Another thing is the story is marked Complete when its not. =( i thought I could read the whole story but its not even halfway done. I'm ready to cry. *sniffles* Don't take what i said the wrong way. I really like your story and I hope you update soon. Snaps for Blossom Love =P
Drea (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
Good beginning chapter. Don't feel like you need to explain yourself to readers. (Ex. the Tokyo floor measurement.)
Can't wait to read more about the characters!
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