I found this short drabble interesting. The way Sesshomaru went out of his way to assist Kagome, yet tries to avoid her was really fun to read. I agree with Dancingfingers about Sesshomaru being more talkative. You could always have the readers read his thoughts. I wanted to mention your summary. I, for one, am horrible at writing a summary, but your summary for this drabble was really good. I just felt like I should mention it because after reading your summary I was really interested in reading this story. I hope you continue this someday.
It's so funny! Although Sesshomaru seems a bit more talkactive, for the lack of a better word, his resignation to deal with Kagome is priceless. :))) I have a good time reading this small bits, too bad you didn't continue.
It might be a good, worth-reading drabbles. :)
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