Reading this with Turbulence by Pink in the background and it's so fitting. Added to faves list.
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What a beautiful story.
Beautifully written!
It started dark and sad but ended nicely. They could have been happy way early if she wasn't so nagivtive.
This was so touching and I loved how you explored the depressing facets of immortality and conveyed them so convincingly via Kagome's psyche. And your writing is excellent and heartfelt. Don't stop writing. Well done.
What a tragic way to fall in love again, but I guess all's well that ends well. It was quite a touching story and quite meaningful.
OMG!
You are good!
Kudos to you and your band of beta's.
Keep writing!
that was so ridiculously sad and also so wonderful
This was awesome, great job!
This was lovely, yet somber. awesome
Interesting story, I like how it covers much of thier lives in a fairly short story. Interesting look on Kagome becomming immortal. Thanks for sharing!
I've actually sat here and cried while reading this. This is so beautiful and wonderfully written. Thankyou very much for writing this one shot.
Ok i know i reviewed this one. I love this story. SO much, it is by far one of my favorites for so many reasons. Its so interesting, a read that i can reread and feel completely satisfied. you touch on such and interesting subject. Its wonderful.
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