Please make a new chapter I think that would be new in costant chapters of the same fan fiction for dokuga and itbwould be so nice to know what happens next
I love the beginning of this fic. I hope you pick it up again at some point. I can just hear Kaede saying in that grave deadpan of hers, "Well child, when a Miko and an inu daiyoukai love each other very much..."
Sakura (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
| Well that was... interesting. it was really good, but i was expecting more info. Other than that, it was really good!
And who is the rooster who got into HER henhouse??? LOL! I love it!
LMAO!!! xD "HOW IN THE HELL I JUST GAVE BIRTH TO A PUPPY??" O.o That is so how I picture Kagz face!! I think this going to be funny! ^____^ HOW DID KAGZ GIVE BIRTH TO A PUP?? IS INU THE FATHER?? DID KAGZ CHEATED HIM?? ALL THESE QUETIONS WILL BE ANWSERS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER OR UPCOMING CHAPTERS!! **DUN DUNM DUN!!**:3 XD
I liked this opening chapter very much. You were very descriptive and I had a clear picture in my mind about all the different emotions and feelings displayed by each character. You made it very suspenseful by keeping the details obscure until the end thus making the emergence of the dear little puppy such a surprise to Kagome, Kaede and Sango. I like your style of writing very much and look forward to reading more. Thank you for this lovely entertainment.
awwww, good story, i cant wait to see more...it will be interesting to see what happens when Inuyasha see's him...i like this so far...
good job
If you do as well with the rest of this fic as you have with the first, you'll have a great fic going. I liked the beginning. It's upbeat and concise, not too wordy. I'll be looking in for more. JEN
Darcy (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Oct 2010
Great first chapter I can't wait to read more!
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
Haha good first chapter!! I look forward to more. :P
Margie (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
Wow XD I can't wait to read more. I love it so far!!
TIANA (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
HAHA THAT WAZ FUNNY CANT WAIT FOR THE NXT CHPT
O_o *stalks fictions*
O_o *stalks fictions*
Kirai (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
Is it Sesshomaru's??? I hope so! I wonder what Inuyashas reaction to that would be
Rhavage (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
MY interest is piqued. Please continue, I can't wait to read more.
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