I guess I find myself a tad conflicted over this story.
While I'm enjoying the writing and the story development, I find myself feeling a little bitter towards Sesshomaru, and a bit of pity for Kagome. I suppose the pity and bitterness come from the fact that it takes a makeover for him to notice her after two years of a work relationship during which he obviously never even gave her a second glance before hand. While I understand that she may be in love with Sesshomaru, why would she want to be with a man that only appreciates her afterwards? I guess it's one of those 'can't see what's right in front of them' cases. A part of me hopes you have Kagome make him work for her, she's made changes for his love, it's only far that he has to do the same.
That aside (and I hope I didn't come off sounding snippy with that bit), I truly do like the story and look forward to more.
Honey22 (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Dec 2010
All I can say is....."I'm addicted to this story!!!"
amy (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Nov 2010
MORE UPDATES< AND DEVELOPMENTS!
I really enjoy your writing! I hope to read more of this and "Blindness" soon!
Tsuki (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Nov 2010
I am so happy you updated! :) That was a good chapter!!! Please update soon, I look forward to reading moreeee :D
Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
Haha Inuyasha asked her out, funny and Sesshomaru's reaction hilarious, I feel pretty bad for Kagome! Keep up the good work!!
no one needs to know (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
love it!!!!!!!!!
TIANA (Chapter 2) - Thu 21 Oct 2010
OMG LUV IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK:)
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Oct 2010
Can't wait till the next chapter :)
an interesting start, can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction of her transformation (from sensible assistant to...?)
polleywog222 (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Oct 2010
Ok- Now you've got me hooked!! More, More- lol great job!!
Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Oct 2010
That was an awesome chapter! I am super glad you updated! I can't wait for Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome's new look!! I am really looking forward to the next chapter! So keep up the good work!!! :D
I'm a sucker for these kind of stories. Can't wait for more.
Chelsea H. (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Oct 2010
I really hate how it just ended like that lol I was reading and was like ok......I like how it starts........................then it ended update soon preeeeetttttttty plz
polleywog222 (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Oct 2010
It's cute- kind of a mix between some of the others I have read. Let's see how it turns out.
Poor Kagome, Sesshomaru can't even see her, she's part of his office furniture! I bet when she hands in her resignation, that will get his attention! Please update soon...
SEB (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Oct 2010
Interesting start and makes this reader wait inpatiently for more. Good Job!
Darkanjel (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Oct 2010
Hurry and put it up!!!! >:D
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