So heartwrenching! It made me want to cry, and believe me it took all I had not to! Wow...simply amazing!! I agree this was beautifully written and touched my very soul. Losing someone is the hardest thing there is, especially when that someone is your love and your life. My only question would be how he died...not that it really matters. The story is powerful enough without knowing. Wonderful job, absolutely amazing!

That was sad. Beautifully written.

Wow. What an original take on the theme. I liked how you left the time period ambiguous, letting the memories speak for themselves. The way you filled mundane actions with meaningful emotions was magnificent. Amazing work.

Oh man, beautiful. Almost made me cry.