Chapter 2... I'm glad you did to make it a full study
Chapter 1... great way the story. I know is been a awhile since you've written this story but I'm just now finding this website,
Best story ever!
to think it happened because if pink underwear!! Lol!
awesome!
Samara (Chapter 36) - Mon 29 Oct 2012
this story got me through hurricanne sandy, and the accompning power outage... thanks for the entertainment... your writing is very engaging...
What to say... I'm not sure. It was a good story, it is in need of some editing. Mostly just some spelling errors and a few grammar spots here and there and it would be much easier to take in and it would flow a lot better. It's missing a little here and there, that if you had perhaps elobrated a bit more would have been much more interesting.
Nothing was mentioned about Rin. She was with Samara, so I guess that she was a witness to the beating. What happened to her?
The story was amazing and I enjoyed it.
A nice ending to this awesome story. About Charmaron paid for what he did. And Inuyasha finally found that happiness. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
Keep it coming.
Thank you for the update. I'm glad to read that Samara and her baby made it through. :)
Venita (Chapter 34) - Tue 06 Mar 2012
Both chapters are great, please update soon.
What a sad chapter :( I look forward to the next chapter!
headalphafemale (Chapter 33) - Sun 26 Feb 2012
I'm confused, it said " the smell of battle and death" so who died?? If Samara was still alive. Why? is it when ever a nice family event is happening it always seems to end with horrible things occurring? Why? risk their pup's lives? Sorry, I guess I'm disappointed because I really like the way you have Kagome's family with the other family. This story goes beyond to tell about more than just her and Sesshomaru falling in love and having sex. It's nice to read what happens afterwards. Please continue and Thank You.
Venita (Chapter 32) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
Love your story, I read your story years ago never got chance to left a review, now I am. Please update soon.
Yes! An update! Thank you. ^^
Absolutely awesome! Can't wait for the update!
It completely slipped my mind, too. That Rin wasn't included in the story. Lol. Shows how much we were deeply enthralled in the story. Anywho, I'm glad that they have decided to be cautious and stay together until the danger passes. Although, I have a big feeling that the other lord will attack them, even though they are more protected. Hmm...
Thanks for the update,
RubyJeweler
This is a nice chapter and those pups are so adorable. But there's one question that's been nagging at me while I re-read this story from the beginning: where's Rin during all of this? Is she in the village or is she in the Western Palace? Is she married to a village human or is she still single? I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
I actually passed up reading this story earlier today, but I knew it was familiar!
I am so glad you updated! Love this little tidbits with Sesshomaru and his nephew lol
Update soon!
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