This was awesome! I was on edge the entire time!!!

wow, leave it up to him to prove someone wronge. :) great story and i loved it.

Ilove, you scared my britches offa me!!!! Damn! I darn near screamed! Then, of course, I had to laugh! And he named it after her! You're killin' me!

This was awesome! It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Great job!

This was too cute! I kept waiting for her to get eaten up by that big creature, but I'm really happy with the way you turned the story around. Your transitions were also very nice. The movement from horror to humor was very smooth. And, isn't it just like a little brother to plot against you. Very well written, dear!

You got me.

I was really into the Halloween atomospherre, the jack-o-lanterns dimly lighting the shrine grounds, the hallways of the sleeping old house at night.  Wonderfully evocative scene-setting.  And then the nightmare actually coming true!  Leading to the panic-filled race to elude the demon.  Which, of course, we all knew had to happen.

Hook, line and sinker.  Great job!  Sesshomaru naming his pet after Kagome was a nice touch...

Aha!!  Trying to be first to review... I LOVE IT!  This story had me going right up until the very end... and, yes, I thought it was scary indeed!  I'm so very glad to see you try your hand at writing again after such a long hiatus... now don't be a stranger, 'k?  Like I said earlier... EXCELLENT!!!!!!!

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